Chapter 6

Sep 03, 2012 16:25


Noah hasn’t moved yet, has barely blinked.  He’s slumped against the kitchen sink, like a rag doll that’s seen better days.  If it weren’t for the slight rise and fall of his chest, as he stares off into the distance, Luke would have been scared to leave him.

It was only when he heard Winston’s voice softly calling out to him that Luke felt it was ( Read more... )

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wheelie47 September 9 2012, 17:30:34 UTC
Winston raises an eyebrow. “No. I know that… I just hate it….I hate what it does to him.” Winston presses his fingers to his temple, moving them in a slow, small circle. “He’s…. he’s different. There are moments where I see him and he’s my Noah… my son… and then it’ll hit him…” Winston closes his eyes. “…it’ll hit him so hard and it’s like…” The fingers appear to press harder into the bone, the older man’s eyes closing for a brief moment. - I'm loving Winston in this. Not only because of his relationship with Noah but also that he is so willing to talk about how worried he is about him to Luke. Can't ever imagine that happening on the show! In fact, I love the whole undercurrent of fathers' loving and being concerned about their sons that runs through this story.

Excellent chapter!

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123cariad September 10 2012, 16:57:58 UTC
Aww Happy Neid mixed with so much sadness in this chapter *sigh*love Winston have I said this before lol

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asonearth September 23 2012, 12:17:19 UTC
i think, although they are all going to really rough times, in the end it will help them all to know eachothers stories... eventually. this story about Noah to just stop taking pictures broke my Noah heart even more... that is if it's possible along this story... because honestly , to see two lost souls like this is so heartbreaking. I'm thankful for the family support here. it gives me hope that time will help them to heal again..
incredible story!!!

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