Your writing is just too beautiful, my dear. It's so poetic and this one has a way of just lilting along, haunting every word, just like Rebekah is haunting the manor because Nik and his obsessions are turning her into a ghost of herself and Elijah is supposed to help her but his loyalties are torn between his honor and his family and HOW DO YOU DO THIS?
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Ohhh, I love this! Especially the milk at the end, and how Elijah tells her she's stronger than all of them.
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Your writing is just too beautiful, my dear. It's so poetic and this one has a way of just lilting along, haunting every word, just like Rebekah is haunting the manor because Nik and his obsessions are turning her into a ghost of herself and Elijah is supposed to help her but his loyalties are torn between his honor and his family and HOW DO YOU DO THIS?
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how do you read into my writing like that btw. gosh i've missed this part of writing - hearing people's take on things and just. gosh, love you.
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Absolutely AWESOME!!!!!
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