The Twist

[jerbearthompson]

Title: The Twist
Author: JerBearThompson
Rating: PG
Spoilers: CoE, I suppose.
Characters: Jack/OC, mentions of Jack/Ianto
Summary: You start to joke about Jack’s ghost, and you’re relieved when the rest of the team doesn’t think you’re crazy.
Disclaimer: BBC, RTD, you know the drill.

Comments

[jooles34]

Don't even know where to start with how good this is. It's a fantastic idea to begin with, I really love the concept. You're writing style is gentle and easy to read, yet you miss nothing when reading it. I'm not much of a fan of 2nd person writing, but I think it works for this peice. The confusion and pain comes out well this way.

Nice job.

[nancybrown]

This was lovely. Great job!

[iceshade]

omg you have me actively trying not to sob my eyes out at work. This was beautiful. I like to think that Jack wouldn't just get over Ianto either <3

[butterflycell]

that was absolutely heart wrenching, but it was so, so good!

Great little fic - good to see something new from you!

[doves_wing]

*sigh* Your angsty fic always makes me cry. This was heartbreaking, and so, so good. Poor Jack.