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mousapelli October 10 2010, 02:20:57 UTC
aw, this is totally cute. I do love these two together and i enjoyed the non-linear order of the fic. I also totally enjoy the bits of the rest of the group around them, Nika and Fujigaya and Yokoo and Kawai. I love that Senga and Tsuka are both total weirdos (they all are really), but that they both love their groups and dancing and so have this really good time with Butoukan that's a different experience entirely than the one they have in their own group, and awwww Tsuka resisting and feeling guilty and then Senga feeling guilty he didn't want to resist.

I would totally hug Senga during tough practices too. Yara yelling at them ♥

This is really super cute fic, thanks so much for writing for me this exchange.

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tokeruyouna October 11 2010, 15:43:33 UTC
This was great. I did not have internet when I read it, but I wanted to make sure to come back and comment to tell you how enjoyable and amusing it was. Thanks for sharing.

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fire_ban October 12 2010, 03:37:20 UTC
“The odd couple,” Kawai calls after them, and then screeches in laughter at his own comment. iowahkwjeh oh god, I LOVE KAWAI. xD There must be something wrong with me, huh? and tsukada, too. ♥ this is a priceless line. xD xD

“I like to show that I care about my friends, unlike some people, you grouch.” //Nikaido scowls. “Weirdo.” aw hell, and 2000 as well. xD *crying* you grouch. WEIRDO.

watching Tsukada teach Senga a new unusual way to bend his body oh boys, never change. 8D i love how it's gocchi and mitsu observing this, too. xD xD

i love the whole last bit. *_* ♥ SO FLUFFY and feel-good and... aww. god, they're such precious boys, and i love how it feels like despite everything or anything they will never change.

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talisa_ahn October 12 2010, 11:39:09 UTC
“They’re sort of like… more ridiculous versions of each other.”
Oh my god. 'Cause they actually kinda are. haha...

Yara-kun, for all his older-brotherly cheerfulness, is still a sadist at heart.
And yes. Yes, he is. *nods*

That was super cute. Thanks!

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snowqueenofhoth October 12 2010, 14:16:02 UTC
Miyata and Tamamori (although they live in different directions)

Already laughing! SUBTLE, GUYS. SUBTLE.

“It’s nice to have a conversation where you don’t need to wonder if Tama-chan is talking to you or his lunch,” is how Tsukada puts it.

I like how he says it as if Tama's in HIS group... which I suppose he nearly is, anyway. XD EbiKisu~

“Yes,” insists Senga. “I like to show that I care about my friends, unlike some people, you grouch.”

Nikaido scowls. “Weirdo.”

HEE! ♥

promises he won’t tell Fujigaya or Yokoo (or Koyama or anyone else prone to excessive nagging)

LOL

“Both of them? Like, they’re both more ridiculous, at the same time?” Kitayama leans against the doorframe.

“Yeah. Sorta.”

Ahahaha!! NICE~

SO CUTE :D :D

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