if your heart was a house i'd be home

May 30, 2014 18:21

if your heart was a house i’d be home
chanyeol/jongin, pg-13, general
to rewrite a story, you have to reach the end first.

for ang, happy birthday! ♥ thanks luvey for being my hurdles coach :3

It’d been rash, a messy termination of puppy love. )

g: general, p: chanyeol/jongin, r: pg-13, f: exo, a: rubyls

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galbijiim May 30 2014, 12:48:58 UTC
UR PERFECT ILU <3 <3 <3 <3

ahhh I'm so glad you liked the prompt and I'm soooooo amazed at what you did with it T___T and this is wonderful and I have always loved ur words and u spoil me. 3:

ALL THE LITTLE DETAILS CY NOTICES/and is distracted by/ ON JONGIN T____T WEEEEEPS

and jongin is totaly still in love with him too and it hurts but it hurts so good and luhan is the shit and BAEKCHEN LMAO

and their little reconciling and then falling back so easily back together pukes and their date to the beach and then watching the STARS
STARRRRRSSSS I LU

the ending is just so good too how dare u take my heart

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rubyls May 31 2014, 02:55:25 UTC
lmao I THINK U SPOIL ME MORE TBH but :DDD

actually I wouldn't mind being lu han's manager tbh....... OR BAEKCHEN'S MANAGER......

I SEE YOU LIKE STARS AS MUCH AS I DO n____n

sigh idk in retrospect I feel the ending was maybe a teeny bit more rushed than I would have liked BUT AS LONG AS U LIKE IT??????? sobs ilu v much I hope u had a good birthday ♥ ♥

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knotweed May 31 2014, 03:53:28 UTC

... )

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rubyls June 4 2014, 04:18:03 UTC
it's ok I gotchu~

WRITE ME BAEKCHEN BEFORE I CATCH U THO

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taopings June 2 2014, 03:36:06 UTC
like omg, i'm still laughing about minseok being luhan's butler, like this fic was a perfect mix of little details that were just really funny, and beautiful descriptions that made their past and present juxtapose really well.

dead bc this is just too precious, seriously.

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rubyls June 4 2014, 04:19:51 UTC
0/10 would not recommend that job at all..... heh thank you!!!!! I'm glad you thought the details were funny :3 I really tried to draw the past/present thing out so!! I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you for reading!

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goopeculiar June 2 2014, 19:34:24 UTC
this is amazing and great and *insert more positive adjectives here*, I love it, I love ittt

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rubyls June 4 2014, 04:20:38 UTC
aww I'm glad you thought so!!!! thank you for reading ;3

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bcnf3nf June 3 2014, 13:21:29 UTC
i love how you tell the progress of their current relationship and insert snippets of their past relationship and how it takes quite a while until they finally kiss

and the way they tell each other that i like you a lot??? is so cute???

i love this ;;

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rubyls June 4 2014, 04:21:54 UTC
ahhhh ;~~~~~~~; I didn't want it to be about the kisses at all in their new relationship (as opposed to the last one), so I hope that worked out!! I'm glad you liked it :3333 thank you for reading!

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