This is Fucking Christmas; HeeWook

Jun 20, 2010 23:29

 "I'm sorry..." Ryeowook murmured hesitatingly under his breath, “… Master…”

Heechul cracked his whip once again on his poor dongsaeng’s private, causing the already on-his-knees boy to whimper and fall onto his stomach. The cruel hyung smirked; this kid was so much fun.

“Who do you belong to?” Heechul asked, his voice soft and sensual.

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pairing: ryeowook/heechul, fandom: super junior, format: one-shot, pairing: heechul/ryeowook, fic, 100 suju challenge

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mallo_mousey June 21 2010, 11:52:12 UTC
XD Ohohoho. Heechul willl be looking forward to next Christmas.
Top!Wookie surprised me. 0[]0

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jeonyong June 21 2010, 15:11:09 UTC
Heck, it surprised me D: As I was typing all of top!Ryeowook's parts I was kind of in a daze ^^'

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macootha June 21 2010, 17:28:40 UTC
ohhh. How does Wookie know Hee has sensitive ears?!..keke
NICE ^^

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jeonyong June 21 2010, 18:21:30 UTC
Cause Wookie spends his extra time watching Heechul get it on with Hangeng ;D

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macootha June 21 2010, 19:04:20 UTC
haha..step one: collecting impressions
step two: learning by doing
step three: mastering by constantly repeating

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jeonyong June 21 2010, 19:59:44 UTC
Master by constantly repeating with Yesung<3

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shesaidwhaa June 22 2010, 00:06:09 UTC
Oh. My. Shiz. This had me ROFL-ing! Heechul's gonna get it next Christmas!

I can't believe Yesungie gave Wookie to him, it's so funny!! Haha will you be writing a sequel?

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jeonyong June 22 2010, 00:50:18 UTC
*huggles you for thinking that this deserves a sequel* Actually, I want to write a multi-chaptered fic for the aftermath after all of this, but I don't think I'll have the free time too =\ If I do though, I'll definitely start on it.

On another note, your picture looks so innocent! How can such an innocent-picture-user read such dirty, dirty stories! D

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shesaidwhaa June 22 2010, 03:23:59 UTC
LMAO! I huggle(d?) you back! No worries. My mind is "pure and blank" according to lots of people! I tell you, America is a dirty place, )well, to some, but I don't see that) so I'm pretty clean in the middle of it -- err, the northwest part of it, but you get what I mean. I found this funny. Straight up smut kind of bothers me. When I have to talk about this or it's implied straight up to my face in person, I either don't get it right away, or blush, look away, and feel awkward. Haha! It amazes me how some people even younger than me can read and WRITE smut... and I'm just a teen.

I read it, and it went in, and then out right after I commented! (Just so you know, for me it's all words, I can't literally imagine it... thats probably where the innocence kicks in? It's like it just blocks automatically with censor.)

Hmm ... Maybe consider your time, and definitely think about it! I'd like a sequel, it's just ironically funny.

Ooh, and on anoooother note, Donghae over there in the background looks reeeeeeeally good ^.^

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shesaidwhaa June 22 2010, 03:58:16 UTC

saranghate July 7 2010, 17:25:44 UTC
EVEN THOU I READ IT THE 15 MINS AFTER U MADE ET, I SHALL COMMENT ANYWAYS, IN CAPS. OH YES. <3 I LOVED IT VERY VERY MUCH, I LOVED IT AS X1000 TIMES DA SUPER JUNIOR'Z SAID SORRY IN SORRY SORRY. : DD

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jeonyong July 7 2010, 18:29:42 UTC
Cx You make me feel so oh so special Nero! :D *huggles* I would be on MSN but I'm having another day where my bro is feeling a little lonely so we're watching children get molested on South Park to make up for it? Rawrrr, miss chu ): *hugdanceglompjump*

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