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The Yellow Letters (8/9)

Jan 26, 2014 22:44

TITLE : THE YELLOW LETTERS (8/9)
PAIRING : KRISHAN
RATING : PG
WORD COUNT : 24K

A/N : This is for exoz, whose comment on the seventh chapter quite literally made my day. No, seriously, it did. Thank you ^_^ Hope this chapter doesn't make people want to hate me. Too much.

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rating: pg, !fanfic, genre: au, pairing: kris/luhan, length: 24k

Comments 4

ext_2394616 January 26 2014, 17:52:56 UTC

omggg i check to see if you updated every 10 minutes or something and i just woke up and saw that you updated and i'm like vhsdkhgksdhg i'm really glad that kris got over his fear and i hope he's running to luhan <3 i can't wait for chapter 9 thank youuuuu

jeonyeokhaneul January 28 2014, 17:33:41 UTC

omg you actually checked for updates that much! i'm honoured! sorry i made you suffer by waiting. next chap is going up now. thank you so much for reading and commenting :)

exoz January 27 2014, 14:33:43 UTC

For me??? I'm honoured dear authornim :)))
THank you.

This chapter in my opinion is pefect. I dont want to kill you when reached the end of it, dont worry XD. I actually feel the ending (the sort of cliff hanger) fits. It's the right moment to end a chapter. so the last chapter will truly be the conclusion. Sometimes,writers tend to make the conclusion arc divided into two or more chapters which ended up imbalance.

You know how they say, a story has its beginning, middle and the end.

and that's how it's best to be. Filler is okay but not untill it makes the story drag.

ANd let me say this to you: This story nailed it.

The three parts are balanced to one and another and the transition from each arc to the next is clear and flowing nicely. very nicely. You proportioned every chapter as perfectly as it could be I guess.

I have nothing to complain.

cant wait for the last chapter!

Hwaiting authornim!

jeonyeokhaneul January 28 2014, 17:32:38 UTC

Next chapter really will conclude everything.

Since this is already a little drama like I tried to make it less drama like as possible in the last chapter but i don't know if i succeeded.

thank you so so so much for saying such nice things about my fic it almost feels as if you have given me a literary review! LOL

thanks again hope the next chapter loves upto your expectations ^^

saranghae :)