Comments | jenwin23: Epiphanies [8 of ?, part 2] PG13 for now

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Epiphanies [8 of ?, part 2] PG13 for now

Apr 26, 2011 18:02

Author: jenwin23
Title: Epiphanies
Rating: PG13 for now
Summary: Chloe realizes something right before she marries Jimmy and changes her mind. Returning to her life her friends try to figure out what happened but Chloe is just trying to figure out where she goes from here.
Disclaimer: Clearly not mine. I barely even know anything about Smallville so ( Read more... )

!fanfiction, !multi chapter, character: oliver queen, author: jenwin23, character: chloe sullivan, rating: pg-13

Comments 13

mystic_ri96 April 27 2011, 01:39:20 UTC

yay u hav Bruce and Hal and here and the rest of the JL + Emil(:
can't wait for ur next update i'm really enjoying ur story

jenwin23 April 27 2011, 02:42:37 UTC

Thanks, the whole cast will be in and out of the fic, but not too much. Though Hal and Oliver are fun to write, so maybe a bit more him than the rest...

mystic_ri96 April 27 2011, 02:53:33 UTC

yay(: cuz i love Hal(:

jediyoda99 April 27 2011, 05:30:12 UTC

I like it how the JL guys are making fun of Ollie's situation. As much as he wants to say it out loud, he cant. Well, Hal is making sense so I say listen to the man.

jenwin23 April 28 2011, 04:01:25 UTC

I think having Oliver who is so confident, flounder is funny. So as guys of course they're enjoying it. If it was more dire or Oliver was heartbroken that wouldn't be funny.

greenteam4ever April 27 2011, 21:08:21 UTC

Wow!I like this story more & more, really. Thank you for this chapter (by the way I reaally like it when they're long). It's great that Hal, Bruce and others are there, I love these characters. Lois is Lois, the last scene with her was absolutely hilarious!
Can't wait for the new chapter!Keep going!

jenwin23 April 28 2011, 04:04:04 UTC

Ah, long chapters...they'll be longer like this one for the next few chapters...

Thanks for reviewing...

sugarpromises April 28 2011, 00:30:00 UTC

I love Chloe walking into the gentlemens club and how each one preferred to watch Chloe in her dilemma, and make fun of Oliver in his dilemma. His conversation with Hal was a nice touch, it's nice because it's from an outsider point of view.

I also really liked the scenes with the JL. Gotta love family and their fierce protectiveness over Chloe and "civilians"

Honestly, I cannot wait to read more. Such great writing!

jenwin23 April 28 2011, 04:05:45 UTC

I think it's like the elephant in a room, you have a bunch of men sitting around and suddenly there is a woman...distraction. I like the idea of Oliver having Hal, who I think of as more of an equal to him than the JL guys.

Thanks for the review.

saurina April 29 2011, 00:08:30 UTC

I hope Oliver is listening because Hal is making an excellent point..;))

I love how you weave all these different moments/situations together and the outcome is yet another amazing chapter. You have such a wonderful flow in your writing and I can't wait for more ;D

jenwin23 April 29 2011, 00:43:20 UTC

I thought so too...Sometimes it just takes an outside viewpoint...

Thanks...flow...never thought of it that way.