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Fic: Some Truths Hurt (V/Logan, all) R [26of ?]

Jul 22, 2009 20:34

Title: Some Truths Hurt
Author: jenwin23
Pairing/Character: all, LoVe
Word Count: 21,502
Rating: R
Spoilers: Season 1

Warnings: Slight violence, cussing, discussions about rape and possible incest.

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meg, keith, mac, connor, fic, logan, love, weevil, veronica, jenwin23, wallace, some_truths_hurt

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sanya4 August 14 2009, 20:47:36 UTC

Mac and John were really cute in this chapter, especially during the awkward conversation about their relationship :)
Mac: Fine yes, God. I'd like to be your girlfriend. Geeze. Are we done yet?
That sounded just like something I imagine Mac would say.

Like you said in your AN, Veronica and Logan may have been a little horny in this chapter, but that's understandable. I see them as typical hormone-crazed teenagers still in the early stages of a committed romantic relationship.

We finally found out what Nadia and Noah are up to, and I hope they won't cause too much trouble for Logan and Veronica.

Both parts with Lynn and Lianne were heartbreaking and I'm a bit worried how all this is going to affect the main characters of this fic. But I believe they can get through anything as long as they are there for each other.