For the Valentine's Day Story Tree

[jenthegypsy]

Written for thefannishwaldo's Cuddles, Snuggles, Kisses and Porn Multi-Fandom Story Tree on DW. Wasn't aware I had to choose between DW and LJ, so, although this one isn't on the LJ Tree, the rest will be.

First fic in well over a year so...apologies and all that.

Title: Beginnings
Fandom: Lost: Desmond, Sawyer
Word Count: 532
Rating: PG-13
Summary: It's

Comments

[janellla]

Jen, you continue to amaze me. I shouldn't be surprised anymore because I'm fully aware of your talent, but still...you have written a gem here.

[whitemunin]

Fabulous!

You nailed their voices perfectly. I can so easily picture this scenes, their expressions, everything. 532 words, and you knocked this one out of the park.

[katje0711]

I absolutely loved this! Loved the description of Desmond's hair and the way he smiles! And let's not forget the Jesus reference!

[idaardella]

the book mobile ain’t been by in a while
*snort*
“Anyone ever tell you you looked like Jesus?”
Heee!
Desmond looked up and smiled, setting off an array of creases and crinkles around his eyes and mouth
Wheeee!!
Sawyer considered a moment, then kicked back in his chair and confessed, “I was a preacher once upon a time.”
:o
“And you were fired?” Desmond asked
Heh heh...
“Nope,” blue eyes sparkled with memory and mischief. “Got caught!”
FABULOUS!

Y'know, I never thought I would be interested enough to read any more Lost related fic, let alone ENJOY it. But you've done it! You broke that barrier.
Well done.
♥