Comments | jentfic_remix: Remix of <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/aeslis">aeslis</a></strong>'s "Serendipity"

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Remix of aeslis's "Serendipity"

Sep 18, 2012 14:45

Title: Kismet
Rating: PG-13
Group/Pairing: Ohmiya
Warnings: None, some curse words though!
Notes: Please read the original story to understand this one. This is a continuation of Serendipity.
Link to Original Story: Serendipity
Link to Original Writer: aeslis

( There isn't a house three stories tall. )

original author: aeslis, rating: pg-13, pairing: ninomiya kazunari/ohno satoshi, author: panpipe, group: arashi, cycle: nine

Comments 1

aeslis September 20 2012, 08:28:13 UTC

I really, really like this as a sequel story, or a continuation! It feels totally right and in line with Serendipity. I like that it wasn't easy--that Nino was surprised by Ohno's mom, because man, of course he would be. And you brought in the other three, which was totally great! If I'd continued the story instead of lazily snipping the end so short, I think this is how I would want it to go. :)