Remix based on akumanakoi's fic 'Please show me your puppy'

[jentremix_mod]

Title: Please show me your heart.
Rating: PG
Group/Pairing: Massu/Ueda
Warnings: puppy eyes
Notes: The original was so cute, I couldn't not remix it this way. I also couldn't find a lot of information about Ueda's other dogs, so I'm sorry if it's not correct. Thanks to A&M for being AMazing.
Link to Original Story: Please show me your puppy.
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Comments

[kitsune_hikaru]

gosh, this is really cute and fluffy~~ ♥♥♥
i feel butterflies in my stomach now~~
pato is just too cute~~ i'm falling more n more into the dog now~~ ♥
lol~
thanks for writing this remix~~ XD

[ryogrande]

thanks! i'm glad it worked for you. :3

[akumanakoi]

Thank you so much for this, dear anon! I really enjoyed writing the original fic, and this is the cutest remix I could possibly imagine for it. There may have been flailing when I read. I'm really glad you came up with the idea! ♥ I love how because Pato-chan is a dog she doesn't understand that things don't work quite the same way in the human world, and finds that strange.... can you imagine if the human world was like that? XD

I love the way you talk about both of them, Ueda especially. Even though there's not much of him specifically doing things, the descriptions of how he is and how he acts are so... Ueda-like, to me. It makes me want to write him more and more so he can dance around his apartment all on his own, lol.

Smiling is kind of like wagging your tail, Pato realizes. Massu smiles a lot. If he were a dog, Pato imagines he'd be constantly wagging his tail. Massu's a happy guy. Tatsuya doesn't smile that much, but his eyes are soft enough to make up for it. If he were a dog, he'd just have to look up at someone to get

[ryogrande]

i was thrilled to find something like this in your archive, actually, where i could tell the story from an animal or an inanimate object's pov. i've always wanted to do that! so thank you, dear, for writing something like this.

can you imagine if the human world was like that?

you mean if we were all dogs who sniff each other's butts? certain would be interesting, lol.

haha i can imagine anyone would get annoyed with such a hyper, loving dog. :3 but he'd be so cute that we'd all let it go, i'm sure. ;)

i'm really glad you liked this so much!! it was quite challenging to write.

[lastingdreams8]

Ahaha, the ending is great! And lsdjlsajg *melts*

Pato's pov is perfect for this, and I love how you characterized the guys if they were dogs too, lol.

She wonders if any of his friends know that he twirls around his apartment and talks to her and the other dogs like they're real people capable of conversation. Sometimes Pato wishes they could talk back, just so he wouldn't look so lonely.
Loved this line!

Thanks for this awesome remix :)

[ryogrande]

the original was so cute, i HAD to. :3 glad it worked for you! :D