remix for myxstorie

[jentremix_mod]

Title: In control
Rating: NC 17
Group/Pairing: Maruda, Nakanishi, Akame . . . KAT-TUN´s gone crazy
Warnings: There´s too much sexual activity for my liking and Jin likes to fool around
Notes:When reading the original story I have wondered about some rather random namedropping in rather interesting situation, this is what have become of it. I hope

Comments

[myxstorie]

sadgksal;kdksad;lkfja;sdalk!!!!!!!!!!!!

“. . . if he thinks of him when you two fuck.”
i LOVE this line, it's EXACTLY the type of Akame I love <333 snarky and bitchy and always wanting to get one up, even in bed. ESPECIALLY in bed.

He needs to make sure that he has fired that annoying and incompetent assistant and hired someone new, capable and old.
lakdaksl AND ONLY PRETENDING NOT TO CARE. PRETENDING SO HARD THEY CAN ALMOST BELIEVE IT.

!!!!!!!!!! SCREAM JIN HAS LIPSTICK I LOVE YOU XDDDDDDDDDD

Besides, he needs Nakamaru to stay confident.
;____; oh, jin

The tea tastes too bitter, and Jin figures that he had left the leaves in for too long.
this line, alskdj ofc, ofc, tea leaves T_T

Jin makes a mental note to make sure that the girl never appears in their near vicinity again.
XDDDDDDDDD

"... beautiful," [..] "So are you,";_________________; I LOVE how you write him. So much

[yararanger]

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[myxstorie]

I will flail over your flail later when reveals are up. I just couldn´t resist to say thank you for flailing. I am so so so happy and admittedly very relieved that you liked this. I loved the original and was so afraid of destroying it... just <3

[sashjun]

I almost died being anon! And you made me so so so so so happy with this comment I can´t even tell you. So THANK YOU and and

you are ok with my akame <3

I DEMAND THE TRUTH BEHIND THE LIPSTICK!!! I almost fried my brain trying to understand and I really really want to know the authors intention there!

and and OMG so much flail to respond to, you liked the Nakanishi section<3 I did too and jksdfejgdlkf

[yararanger]

HOLY CRAP OH MY GOD WOW.

Vix like... keysmashed at me that this was amazing so even though I'm not participating I had to read and... ohhhh my god wow *________*

I love, love the like... sub-headers that you use as the fic progresses, and the k.jdzfbdk.cfkx;.hbcfg I can't even leave a coherent comment, I'm too overwhelmed with how awesome this is *______* AND JUNNO. OH MY GOD. I was just thinking, "Junno hasn't made much of an appearance yet! Where is Junn---OH." HOLY SHIT HE'S AWESOME OMFFFFFFG your Junno just completely pwned my face off oh my god *_____* and just, GUH the whole tdrksjgkxdirgtdlifuystgd THE WHOLE THING IS AMAZING. I'm really glad that you got Vix to remix, anon-san, because this fic is just awesome *_*

[sashjun]

thanks for keeping me anon <3 AND jsdfhksdljgvôdrlsk YOU LIKED IT! <3

I am so glad I got Vix who is such a great soul<3

I ... I do not deserve all those nice words, it´s the original that is awesome!

[lineelu2001]

*HUGGLES THE FIC* IDEC the fact that it's not possible to do so!

Thank you for the fic~~~~

[sashjun]

*huggles YOU* thank you for reading <3 and letting me know you liked it

[zheinpathos]

*gurgledies*

Love their dynamic, love the Akame, JUNNO IS EPIC <3

This is wonderful <3

[sashjun]

<3333 THANK YOU!

it makes me happy that you mentioned their dynamic <33333

[tokeruyouna]

He needs to make sure that he has fired that annoying and incompetent assistant and hired someone new, capable and old.
That is too funny.

I mean, fairies are a huge turn off,
ROFL. There is no way to describe how great that line is.

“Do you . . .” Jin feels out of place asking about love.

“No, I mean, it´s just a crush. No,”
I like how they get along like this and just understand each other.

The want had been consuming Ueda for some time now, images of just how Nakamaru would treat him, kiss him, fuck him, becoming more vivid with each passing day.
GAH!

the hottest image to form inside Ueda´s head yet
YET. Haha.

Just as Nakamaru stroking and touching and biting just a moment ago had struck Ueda so much that he has barely noticed the other man leaving him.
::convulsing with laughter:: I know that is an odd reaction, but I hope you understand.

“That´s fine,” Ueda tells him.
I love this line and what it means.

Ueda´s eyes close, and the delusion he is chasing slips from his grasp.In my opinion that was the perfect ending to

[sashjun]

eeeeehhhhhhh so much of lines I too find kind of "mentionable"

*___*

Thank you for all the help with this, you were great!!! <3

::convulsing with laughter:: I know that is an odd reaction, but I hope you understand.
Unfortunately I do. IHU! <3 and that is not a typo ;D Why do you keep laughing at my fail DDDDD: Was it at least possible to do it this way and really poor Ueda must have felt like a lightening struck him or something and ... well in fact ROFL!

I love this line and what it means.
Yeah :3

In my opinion that was the perfect ending to this all. <3333333
It is kind of funny how this line came about, but I liked it even if originally it was written to mock myself and the originally planned end. It is nice to know that it was a good decision to keep it ♥

AGAIN THANK YOU SO MUCH. I think because of your support I managed to like this story (yeah for being smug about myself @__@) and that is a feat so I am very grateful!

[tokeruyouna]

I was not laughing at your fail. I was laughing at your creative solutions.

You are welcome! I am happy you ended up liking it (and have no problem with you saying it, obviously, since I am always talking about how much I like my own fics).

♥