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Remix of shatteredtenshi's 'To Shatter the Pieces More'

Aug 01, 2009 15:39

Title: The Pieces That Still Fit (Broken Walls and Cracked Hearts)
Rating: G
Group/Pairing: NEWS; Koyama/Yamapi, very little Ryo/Koyama
Warnings/Genre (ie mpreg, kinks, etc): Just a whole lot of angst and introspection
Notes: Beta-ed by madpig4life
Link to Original Story: To Shatter the Pieces More
Link to Original Writer: shatteredtenshi

( Those walls that I’ve created had several cracks already, I’m sure. There definitely would be one labeled 'Yamashita Tomohisa.' )

group: news, original author: shatteredtenshi, pairing: koyama keiichiro/nishikido ryo, rating: g, author: lastingdreams8, pairing: koyama keiichiro/yamashita tomo

Comments 4

shatteredtenshi August 1 2009, 20:02:35 UTC

Oh, oh, you remixed this fic!

Considering how the fic was filled with dark angst somewhat due to the challenge it was written, I think it's wonderful how you took the fic and approached it differently. The angst is lighter (without Ryo being such a...maniac maybe), but it's definitely not lighter in a bad way.

I really liked the beginning and the alternate ending~ The beginning with a young Kei-chan was really adorable, and at the same time, it sets up the mood of the fic. Then, the ending, most definitely a lot more hopeful than mine, lol. It's a nice twist.

Thanks for writing!~

lastingdreams8 August 8 2009, 23:12:37 UTC

I'm so glad you liked this:)
Especially the beginning and the ending, since I took it totally off plot there, lol.
Thank you :)

ungalad August 12 2009, 17:41:36 UTC

The original fic was much more darker and sad. This one, albeit said, is kind of hopeful. I liked the change. :D

lastingdreams8 August 12 2009, 21:40:24 UTC

Thanks for the feedback :)