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Apr 26, 2009 10:49

Title: Serious (Wolf at the Door Remix)
Writer: waxrose
Rating: R
Group/Pairing: Arashi; [Ohno/Aiba]
Original: A remix of Serious by ferinough
Notes: Lots of love to rhythmia, still_ciircee and fluttering for looking this over! ♥

Serious (Wolf at the Door Remix) )

author: waxrose, rating: r, original author: nicefinalbeam, pairing: aiba masaki/ohno satoshi, group: arashi

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fluttering April 26 2009, 17:43:05 UTC
Damn girl, I still say this is awesome!!!!!
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nicefinalbeam April 26 2009, 18:09:36 UTC
This is so absolutely beautiful and just them. I loved how you took my concept and let it play out, almost like... a proof, a more specific example of how it is they go together. And omg -

"I never should have lent you that Dr. Doolittle DVD," Sho sighs. "How does everyone feel about curry for lunch?"

*cries* That might have been my favorite part? OH SHO!
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rhythmia April 27 2009, 06:47:07 UTC
Still amazing. ♥

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dephi April 29 2009, 07:16:28 UTC
Compared to the original, this one provides more information and well, the interactions are written with more details. I like this, and I also like the original. Both well, despite having same plot, different styles were used and it's uh...sweet? :))

Thanks for writing ♥

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ununoriginal August 9 2009, 18:40:15 UTC
it was lovely the way u expanded on the original story, fleshing it out with more details yet still keeping to its feel/emotions :)

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