"Holding My Breath" -remix of ununoriginal's fic

[lastingdreams8]

Title: Holding my Breath
Writer: dark3princess
Rating: G
Group/Pairing: NEWS; Nishikido Ryo x Kato Shigeaki
Warnings/Genre: Very slight mention of domestic violence
Author's Note: This is my first remix ever, so I hope you'll enjoy it and provide feedback on how I should improve:) Beta read by madpig4life
Links to Original Story, Original Writer: There Won’t Be Any

Comments

[lastingdreams8]

Thank you for reading :D

[fairy_illusions]

Awww~

I loved unun's fic and this was lovely. Ryo's insecurity and Shige's determination into getting Ryo to overcome his fear of succumbing to Sousuke. We actually get to see Shige in this remix and so I'm especially happy. I love the dynamics of their relationship. They know each other's boundaries and so they don't push the wrong buttons. Indeed, there will be no bloody wedding dresses waiting for RyoShige.

Lovely~ &hearts

[lastingdreams8]

Yay! Thanks for your lovely comment :)
♥

[trivialaffair]

Annaaaaaaaaaa~

What a lovely remix XDDDDDD

::happy::

[lastingdreams8]

YAY:D
Glad you liked it ♥
*skips happily*

[newskattuneito]

wow wow u point the shige's view this time!! i like it!! no matter ranting of fic if NISHIKATO i will read it ahahks..
so nice and good fic!! ryochan just believe that shige always by ur side ne ahahks
"Congrats! Concert’s over right? Don’t forget to take a breather before rushing home. It’ll still be here ♥"
this last message really lovely ne!!

[lastingdreams8]

Thank you! :D
Shige's important when it comes to NishiKato, so I decided to add him more:)

[clutzynew]

really like it =DDDDDDDDD
and it just has the feeling of shige actually being there for ryo =DDD

[lastingdreams8]

yep, I'm glad you liked seeing more of Shige:)