Fandom: Maou

Sep 13, 2008 05:43

Title : Under the Cut. This IS A SPOILER WARNING
Rating :G
Pairings:None
Genre :Naruse thinking thoughts

Warnings: Just to make it QUITE QUITE CLEAR. THIS IS A SPOILER WARNING. DO NOT READ UNLESS YOU”VE SEEN IT ALL. READ AT YOUR OWN RISK.

Disclaimer: Naruse Ryou, Naoto Serizawa and all characters belong to the TBS drama Maou and their ( Read more... )

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mariegina September 15 2008, 09:30:02 UTC
Lovely. <3

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i_am_zan September 15 2008, 10:19:46 UTC
thank you. ^_^

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i_am_zan September 15 2008, 17:53:23 UTC
Thank you for those kind and lovely words.

I did write another piece here if you haven't already read it.

And thank you for reading.

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emilenshook September 15 2008, 17:44:09 UTC
This icon will have to do for now...I need a sad!Naruse one! (I just finished the last ep like 5 minutes ago...how shocking and heartwrenching. Oh Naruse...*tear*)

Now, my goodness, this poem was gorgeous. You've captured all his thoughts, all his regret. Wow.

"Only at the end, I think you see
Too late I grasp, you understood me"

Perfection.

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i_am_zan September 15 2008, 17:55:26 UTC
*hands over tissues* - I hope you're ok. As I've said to other people I was a wreck after that too ..even now sometimes I get melancholic thinking about it.

... and ... *blushes* - thank you my dear, you are too kind.

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emilenshook September 15 2008, 18:07:41 UTC
yes, I'm ok. I didn't sob "too" much; I was mostly jumping up and down and screaming at my computer. XD But what got me really bad was Papa Serizawa crying over Noriyoshi (I teared up here like you wouldn't believe) and then Naruse screaming at Naoto to kill him... :( :( :( I couldn't have asked for a better ending, though.

hee, what can I say, I love poetry!

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lil_monk September 27 2008, 05:07:11 UTC
That was beautiful. I did tear a bit at the dad crying over his dead son, and your poem ended nicely, letting Manaka Tomoo's personality shine through like a rainbow... and then fade.

Oh, and we're back :D

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panthera_mort September 28 2008, 00:04:21 UTC
Ooh, i think it's just me because my sleepy brain read it in a sing-song way, i see this as an angst song
(>.<)

the ending has a huge impact.
'too late...
...you understood me'

O______o
zan, the poet!
:)

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