Disposable Teens, chapter ten

[jenoofer]

Chapter nine

Comments

[dragonladyk]

Wow. I mean, just, wow. *speechless*

DragonLady

[jenoofer]

My work here is done. :)

[taroly1888]

Oh.

My.

God.

Just, man, that was amazing. Love the angst and the way Ray won't let himself go until Benny's right there. I think this is exactly how Ray would've reacted had the dudes at Aliance Atlantis and Paul Haggis actually written Gay Ray and Benny (!) Such a shame they didn't...

Which is why I'm so grateful you are!! :)

[jenoofer]

I think this is exactly how Ray would've reacted had the dudes at Aliance Atlantis and Paul Haggis actually written Gay Ray and Benny(!) Such a shame they didn't...

Which is why I'm so grateful you are!! :)

I think that's the nicest compliment I've ever received about my writing! Thank you.

[taroly1888]

No need to thank me. I'm just calling it as I see it. And I see it as fantastic. You keep writing like this and I'll keep commenting like that!

Deal?

[aingeal8c]

Poor Ray although his reaction is belivable. And the need in Fraser, very true epsecially form what we've seen in canon.

[jenoofer]

And the need in Fraser, very true epsecially form what we've seen in canon.

I'm glad you said that. I've found it particularly difficult to balance Fraser's sense of honour and restraint with his desperation and his desire for affection. He's a tough character to crack in fanfiction, especially since this is the first thing I've written from his perspective.

[aingeal8c]

I'm glad you said that. I've found it particularly difficult to balance Fraser's sense of honour and restraint with his desperation and his desire for affection. He's a tough character to crack in fanfiction, especially since this is the first thing I've written from his perspective.

I agree I find his speech easy but emotionally he's very tough.