Comments | jenoofer: Disposable Teens, chapter 6

jenoofer

Disposable Teens, chapter 6

Sep 02, 2006 11:36

Chapter five

( Chapter six )

due south, disposable teens, fics

Comments 11

myorangecrush September 2 2006, 15:51:50 UTC

Woot - more!

Guessing the writing'll be slowing down as of Monday though?

jenoofer September 2 2006, 18:03:25 UTC

It's likely, although some of the later chapters are already written and just waiting for me to fill in the blanks.

joandarck September 2 2006, 18:36:37 UTC

Hey, listen. I don't know whether this is something that would matter to you, but in some earlier chapters you have affect/effect and discreet/discrete switches. I wouldn't mention it, except I've been enjoying this series a lot, and it seems a shame to have something getting in the way of its presentation. I could reread and give you line locations if you're interested (not a full proofread, just those two words). Otherwise, never mind, carry on!

jenoofer September 2 2006, 19:00:54 UTC

If you could point me to them, that'd be helpful. I did a check on the original document and couldn't find any, but if there are mistakes that I've made editing on LJ rather than typing in Word, they should be changed. Thanks.

joandarck September 2 2006, 19:57:13 UTC

Okay, I'll go reread then and e-mail to you.

dragonladyk September 4 2006, 07:15:07 UTC

WOW. I am in awe. You convey so much pathos without being sappy and I just... WOW. *cuddles Ray*

DragonLady

jenoofer September 4 2006, 17:49:21 UTC

Thank you. All your feedback for this story has been wonderful.

mlyn September 10 2006, 19:00:45 UTC

Still really enjoying this series. Thanks for writing!

jenoofer September 13 2006, 07:08:45 UTC

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. Glad you're enjoying it.

At last chase65 October 1 2006, 06:39:41 UTC

I read the first part of this right around the time the assignments went out for the fraservecchio ficathon, I fedback then I realized that you were my person so I had to set it aside, cause I don't like to read in a fandom when I'm writing in it and I didn't want to be unduly influenced, but now...

I'm all caught up with this fic and looking forward to the rest of the chapters. I'm enjoying the buildup and the way the foundation of their friendship is being established w/o the death of Fraser's father to bring them together.

Re: At last jenoofer October 6 2006, 20:31:39 UTC

So glad you're enjoying it! Chapter seven is up now too, and the next one hopefully won't be long now.