Comments | jennytork: Fic: "Of Spirits and Circuses" 1/10

jennytork

Fic: "Of Spirits and Circuses" 1/10

Aug 03, 2009 11:15

( CHAPTER ONE )

Comments 4

sparrowsverse August 3 2009, 20:09:47 UTC

Hee! Poor Peter, almost kicking Mike!Puppy.

Peter chuckled. "When you're blind, your eyes are constantly wide. They make you look really young."

"Oh, great." But Mike was laughing.

I loved this bit! Great interaction between the two. :D

And uh-oh! Why do I get the feeling the circus won't be what they think it'll be. :D

jennytork August 3 2009, 20:13:12 UTC

Thank you so much! Yeah, that circus is going to come out not at all like they think!

buni_in_the_sky August 16 2009, 03:12:27 UTC

I like how you write characters and their relationships. You can really fell for the characters when they're either sad or happy.*continues to read the others* It's so cute how everyone is taking care of Mike when he's the one that did that for the others. That's true friendship. :3

jennytork August 16 2009, 11:19:28 UTC

YAY thank you!

Can't wait to see your comments on the rest!