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blossomlegs March 10 2013, 15:33:13 UTC
Jack is really a bastard in this verse. Poor Ianto his normal life over and now a prisoner of TW3, Jack. Looking forward to next chapter in this verse. Thanks for sharing your talent!

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jenexell April 7 2013, 12:52:34 UTC
Thank you for you comment. sorry I was so long replying.

I'm so glad you've enjoyed this story and like the 'verse I've created. Yes Jack is a bastard, but hey, he's Jack so we'll forgive him.

Thanks you so much once again.

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katwillow March 10 2013, 15:34:14 UTC
May I have some more good story please?

(Thank you)

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jenexell April 7 2013, 12:52:50 UTC
You may. its up now. lol. thanks for the comment.

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fide_et_spe March 10 2013, 15:34:35 UTC
Oh wow. That chapter is perfection. I just loved Ianto's POV. Jack was so in character here, you can imagine him threatening to kill and then offering coffee. I so want Ianto not to be scared of him and to stand up to him. Jack has treated him so badly it's no wonder he acted out of self defense. I kind of hate that Jack can't see that. Of course I get that he is still suspicious but poor Ianto!

I am very happy that you are writing more episodes in this verse, it's a great idea you've got here, I don't think I've seen anything like it.

That last little first person section, wonderful.

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jenexell April 7 2013, 12:54:27 UTC
Sorry I've taken so long to reply. I can't tell you how much your wonderful comments have meant to me and how happy I am that you've enjoyed the story.

Thank you once again. I hope you enjoy the next episode as much!

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sammydragoncat March 10 2013, 18:00:03 UTC
Great epilogue! I'm glad that Ianto has been allowed to get a bit of air - he has been treated very badly by Jack and Torchwood. I'm so glad you are continuing with this verse.

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jenexell April 7 2013, 12:55:36 UTC
Sorry for taking so long to reply. Thank you for your wonderful comments on this story, I'm so glad you've enjoyed it. Can't promise things will get much better for Ianto any time soon but you know what they say, every cloud has a silver lining.

Thanks once again.

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angelsphonebox March 10 2013, 20:38:23 UTC
Amazing!!! Can hardly wait for the next installment, looking forward to it!

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jenexell April 7 2013, 12:56:05 UTC
Then your wait is over. next story is going up now. thanks for your comments on this and sorry its taken so long to reply.

Hope you enjoy.

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