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jendavis

The Everlasting Chapter 4

May 17, 2010 00:50

Title: The Everlasting
Rating: PG-13 for now
Spoilers: Up through end of season 2
Pairing: Alec Hardison/ Eliot Spencer
Warnings: None for *this* chapter...
Disclaimer: Don't own, don't sue, don't take this too seriously.

Story starts here.

( Chapter 4 )

Comments 20

ladymorgana13 May 17 2010, 21:16:18 UTC

*huggles the boys* YAY

jendavis May 18 2010, 21:35:41 UTC

:D Things certainly are starting to look up for them!

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jendavis May 18 2010, 21:36:17 UTC

Oh, I'd imagine they'll have plenty of opportunities to figure it out for themselves, coming up here. :)

Thanks dear!

rubygirl29 May 18 2010, 03:29:43 UTC

I love the two scenes in the bathroom, they reflected each other as surely as the mirror reflected their images. And I loved the last line. Awww ... And Eliot trying to comfort Alec. Awww ...

I think I have to go back and read it again.

jendavis May 18 2010, 21:38:44 UTC

Aw, thanks dearie!

The boys are still in quite a state, but things are starting to get a little better for them! And the snuggles don't hurt, either. Not that either of them would ever call it that. ;)

rubygirl29 May 19 2010, 00:41:25 UTC

Of course, now I have this insane need to write a John/Ronon snuggle scene ... not that they'd call it that either! I think Traitor is calling me ...

jendavis May 19 2010, 03:48:45 UTC

I have an insane need for you to write that scene as well. I need it like breathing. :)

(and a totally non-nagging *yay* for the prospect of more Traitor on the horizon) :)

milydo May 21 2010, 14:28:23 UTC

Now they go find Parker, and once reunited they take over Boston. Right ? Right ?

Can we have chapter 5 now ? Please ...

jendavis May 23 2010, 01:14:32 UTC

Hmmm...perhaps... ;)

Hope to have the next bit up fairly soon. RL has been insane, so it's slowed me down a bit, but hopefully, very very soon, the next part will be up. :)

eotu May 24 2010, 01:04:33 UTC

I have finally had the chance to get to this story. I am glad I waited, because if I'd had to take the suspense of them not knowing for too long, it would have made me nuts :-).

Great story. Great handling of the apocalyptic theme. Looking forward to the continuation.

jendavis May 24 2010, 03:35:07 UTC

Hee! Thanks!

I'm the same way- I rarely read WIPs for that exact reason, but if I waited until it was totally finished, I'd probably get stuck halfway through and stop writing it. Posting it up in chapters keeps me a little bit more on the ball, I guess. :)