Come Undone (Clint/Coulson, 5/?)

[jendavis]

Title: Come Undone
Fandom/Pairing: The Avengers, Clint Barton/Phil Coulson
Spoilers/Warnings: Is there anyone who hasn't seen the movie yet? Well, if not, this is a fix it. Eventually.
Rating: R
Summary: It was supposed to get easier, afterwards.

Previous Chapters: DW // LJ // AO3

Comments

[hogwartshoney]

Wait.... what???!!!

After we're lulled into a nice post-smexin' haze, you do us THAT!! *gasp*
I hope it's just a dream, Phil, my sweet, juuuust a bad dream. Right? ;0/

[hogwartshoney]

And, since that comment doesn't do the chapter justice, I love this fic. I don't "do" WIPs, but this one... yes.

I sympathized with poor Phil - being unable to just. go. home. and the physio and all that. Poor guy.

I like the tension in this, both Phil's having to recover, his and Fury's convo, him and Clint, Clint generally, and everything. It just feels as though something's brewing.....

And Tony's little bit of almost trusting people ♥

[jendavis]

Aplogies for the delayed reply- I've been remiss in checking my comments.

I'm really glad you're liking the story so far! I've just got another chapter posted, and hope to get a lot more up soon. WIPs kind of drive me up the wall as a reader (even though I'm usually too excited to hold off on posting until the story's written), so kudos to you for bearing with me. Hopefully fairly soon I'll get back to being nice to them... :)

(And by the by, your icon has me trying to sort the Avengers into Hogwart's houses now. This may be what I do with the rest of my day. ) (I'm not even kidding, here.)

:)

[hogwartshoney]

Wheee !
Thor - Gryffindor !
Loki - Slytherin
Cap - Gryffindor
Banner - Ravenclaw
Stark - Ravenclaw
Hawkeye - I think Ravenclaw
Widow - Ssslytherin
Coulson - Gryffindor
Hill - Hufflepuff maybe?
Fury - Dumbledore!! Lol but I think Slytherin though

Honey here, btw, just too lazy to log in from this phone :P

[jendavis]

Hah! Totally. Not surprised to see such a small showing from Hufflepuff. And Fury's totally Slytherin. One look at the eye patch and jacket, and the sorting hat had him figured from 30 feet away. :)

[lar_laughs]

*splutters*

WHAT? WHAT? WHAT?

[jendavis]

Hee! Like I said... worse before it gets better. Which should probably be my icon, given my tendencies. ANyway, more's up now, so at least the better's slightly sooner in coming. :)

[lar_laughs]

No, no! Don't give me the better because that means it'll be almost done. *grins* I'll take the angst!

This icon is still very much me as I read it, though.

[jendavis]

Oh, don't worry. We haven't even gotten to Clint's POV yet, and we're only just now getting into the plot...

*plans more evil things*

*cackles madly*