I Still Remember (Leverage, Alec/Eliot, Epilogue)

Oct 08, 2011 02:00

Title: I Still Remember
Beta(s): amuly ♥, nevardevereaux ♥
Artists: cybel ♥, ryuutchi ♥
Characters/Pairings: Alec Hardison/Eliot Spencer
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Drama, Post-Series
Warnings/spoilers: None.
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Summary: Alec's been running his own crew for five years when Eliot reappears- on the other side of a job. Remembering someone, it turns out, ( Read more... )

bigbang, leverage, alec hardison/eliot spencer

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conchita_perez October 9 2011, 00:04:35 UTC
loved it!

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jendavis October 9 2011, 00:10:26 UTC
Thanks! Still waiting to get the last of the links set up for the actual big bang posting. There's some art and a soundtrack that will be well worth checking out, hopefully sooner rather than later. :)

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conchita_perez October 9 2011, 00:18:03 UTC
Cool! Sorry if I jumped the gun with reading/commenting. I may or may not have been stalking your journal in anticipation. ;)

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jendavis October 10 2011, 04:52:21 UTC
Oh, you've nothing to apologize for! I'm totally flattered! I'm just worried that the artists might lose out on some exposure because of the timing breakdown. So you should totally check back when you have a chance and take a look at their work. ;)

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lmx_v3point3 October 10 2011, 00:24:53 UTC
I don't know where to start, so I'll go for the classic: DAMN YOU FOR BREAKING ME SO BADLY WITH EVERY FREAKING FIC!! (Ahem)

Hardison and Parker's story in this, and the use of the mountain dialogue in terms of their relationship - that it's something that Hardison will work at until he just can't anymore, and lose everything else in the mean time... it was heartbreaking and I loved it and it made me cry more than once.

Once I realised Eliot was reciting addresses off Hardison's list I had to go away and have a breathe for a bit to avoid missing things through blurry eyed reading. Because of pollen, you understand...

The regret and uncertainty when they realise what they've been missing is something you're so brilliant at conveying.

All in all... damn, I love your work.

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jendavis October 10 2011, 04:57:42 UTC
Aw, thanks hon! Glad you liked it! Um, sorry for making you cry? *hugs* :)

I just realized that I can no longer see the word "pollen" without my brain immediately jumping to "sex pollen." Fandom has ruined me. Glad that the addresses worked! I was going back and forth for a while, debating on whether I should leave them in or take them out. Cool cool cool!

Must sleep now. I have to be at my desk at work in *gulp* six hours. :(

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strongwriter October 11 2011, 04:03:03 UTC
HOW DO I EVEN BEGIN TO REVIEW.
This is just. Oh my God. There are literally no words to explain how I am FEELING. All of your stuff, everything I've read, is just so perfect. In voice, in detail, in dialouge, in everything. The whole fleshed out part of the job and it being so thought out at the steps they take that leads them to sitting on a plane together? There's just no way to explain what I am FEELING.

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jendavis October 14 2011, 04:10:34 UTC
Aw, thank you! It was strange writing a story of this length and completing it before posting chapter 1- which isn't usually how I do things- because it allowed me to tighten up some stuff. On the other hand, bouncing from cliffhanger to cliffhanger tends to be my MO when writing, so I was starting to get worried that it would all just mush together or something. SO I'm REALLY glad you liked it! *hugs*

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teeq_70 November 6 2011, 16:04:33 UTC
I'm so behind on my Alec/ Eliot stories. I finished reading this one and one you wrote last year. Another five loves for this story too. Need more.

KAP
11/06/11
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jendavis November 7 2011, 04:52:41 UTC
Aw, thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

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daoryn February 21 2012, 12:59:30 UTC
This was great!
And shame on me, I wasn't sure of Eliots motives in there for a while.
Eliot reciting those emergency-contacts was the icing on the cake. That was so cute! Once I realized what he was reciting there... hehe
I like how Hardison is on the one hand so much harder, just enough to lead a team but on the other hand is still the absolute nice guy inside. (And he just is, let's face it!)
I like all those flashbacks, showing how the team fell apart and I like Parker with Apollo, she seems happy =D
I like how Eliot left the day of the wedding and I like that Hardison framed that postcard. =)
Ah, that was wonderful! I am so glad you wrote this!
Have a hug!

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