Title: I Still Remember
Beta(s): amuly ♥, nevardevereaux ♥
Artists: cybel ♥, ryuutchi ♥
Characters/Pairings: Alec Hardison/Eliot Spencer
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Drama, Post-Series
Warnings/spoilers: None.
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Summary: Alec's been running his own crew for five years when Eliot reappears- on the other side of a job. Remembering someone, it turns out,
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Hardison and Parker's story in this, and the use of the mountain dialogue in terms of their relationship - that it's something that Hardison will work at until he just can't anymore, and lose everything else in the mean time... it was heartbreaking and I loved it and it made me cry more than once.
Once I realised Eliot was reciting addresses off Hardison's list I had to go away and have a breathe for a bit to avoid missing things through blurry eyed reading. Because of pollen, you understand...
The regret and uncertainty when they realise what they've been missing is something you're so brilliant at conveying.
All in all... damn, I love your work.
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I just realized that I can no longer see the word "pollen" without my brain immediately jumping to "sex pollen." Fandom has ruined me. Glad that the addresses worked! I was going back and forth for a while, debating on whether I should leave them in or take them out. Cool cool cool!
Must sleep now. I have to be at my desk at work in *gulp* six hours. :(
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This is just. Oh my God. There are literally no words to explain how I am FEELING. All of your stuff, everything I've read, is just so perfect. In voice, in detail, in dialouge, in everything. The whole fleshed out part of the job and it being so thought out at the steps they take that leads them to sitting on a plane together? There's just no way to explain what I am FEELING.
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KAP
11/06/11
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And shame on me, I wasn't sure of Eliots motives in there for a while.
Eliot reciting those emergency-contacts was the icing on the cake. That was so cute! Once I realized what he was reciting there... hehe
I like how Hardison is on the one hand so much harder, just enough to lead a team but on the other hand is still the absolute nice guy inside. (And he just is, let's face it!)
I like all those flashbacks, showing how the team fell apart and I like Parker with Apollo, she seems happy =D
I like how Eliot left the day of the wedding and I like that Hardison framed that postcard. =)
Ah, that was wonderful! I am so glad you wrote this!
Have a hug!
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