Fic: EdxAlfons, "Stage Lights"

May 18, 2008 18:21



Always watching them. Always near them. Eyes always on them, the puppets in the middle of center stage, bathed in the stage lights that would always hover above. Ever-dancing for the patrons seen and unseen, where ideas flew in the air and great minds stared and swooned…

“Ah, what  great minds they have!” one might say, staring ( Read more... )

nsfw, edxalfons, nws, fma

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sollylolly May 19 2008, 04:13:11 UTC
:3
It's nice to read such fic's in the morning,
yes yes i just woke up x) it's 06.12 where i live (in the morning mind you)
Keep up the good writing! ^^

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inuyashanohime May 19 2008, 04:33:15 UTC
Hahaha--wow, that's early XDXD (I think it's 11:32 PM right now where I'm at :O)

But it's really not that great...but thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed reading!

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sollylolly May 19 2008, 04:54:12 UTC
pff...when one knows how to write good, their fic is good...don't mind my strange formed sentenc's x3

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sozonnohime_09 May 19 2008, 15:04:51 UTC

Loved it. :3

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inuyashanohime May 20 2008, 19:15:24 UTC
:3 Thank you!! I'm glad you like it <3<3

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:) cookiesushi December 15 2008, 23:29:30 UTC
That's some beautiful imagery you have there~ <3
And I love how you refer to them as the "Golden-eyed one" and "blue-eyed one".

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Re: :) inuyashanohime December 16 2008, 03:26:52 UTC
*bluuush* Th-thank you; I'm glad that you think so!

And I loved that bit of imagery as well--actually, writing stories that focus on mostly imagery like this come the most naturally to me. But um...I'm glad that you like it. *flushflush*

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porsche_cash January 10 2009, 11:59:00 UTC
oh this was good. I really like "Let the rest of the world go to Hell" it works so well an makes this just a little sweeter. At least I think so.

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