After the first chapter I had to put it down. Then I said "maybe I should stop judging stories by the first chapter..." so picked it up again and read chapter 2 and 3. This is the most LONG-WINDED story ever and nothing HAPPENS!
Three chapters have passed in what I could probably write into ONE chapter. WTF!
When you really have no attachment to characters... it makes things DULL. The book feels so long and boring... I don't CARE about any of them...
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Three chapters have passed in what I could probably write into ONE chapter. WTF!
When you really have no attachment to characters... it makes things DULL. The book feels so long and boring... I don't CARE about any of them...
I can't feel bothered to attempt chapter 4...
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