Heroes fanfic: Another Family Affair

[jemmalynette]

Title: Another Family Affair
Rating: T
Warnings: Mild swearing
Characters: Peter Petrelli, mentions of the rest of the Petrelli family, Alex Petrellli (OC)
Summary: Arthur had another son from an affair that Peter and Nathan never knew about. It's only after Nathan dies that Angela confesses they have a younger brother, Alex, who lives with his

Comments

[eternal_moonie]

Absolutely AWESOME story!

[jemmalynette]

Thank you, dear!

[amles80]

Oh, I like this a lot! Peter is very much in character, and this feels like something that could totally happen if ever there would be a season five. You're going to continue this one, I hope?

[jemmalynette]

Thank you so much! :D Glad you're enjoying it! And I definitely am going to continue - there's lots to come! :D

[amles80]

I'm glad to hear that; gives me something to look forward to. :)

[random_degree]

Very interesting, how much of this story have you got planned out?

[jemmalynette]

Thank you :) Would "enough" be a sufficient answer, lol! I have my OC's life planned out a lot, and I plan to reveal parts of it in future chapters. As for what happens after Peter finds him, I have plenty of ideas for that too but it's not so much set in stone.

[sakura_no_mi]

Ooh, very good start! I love your OC already, he sounds like he has the potential to be fleshed out so much more. Hope you plan to continue this story :) The only thing I was wondering about is Alex's age. I think you might need to make him a bit younger for him to still be in foster care? (it might actually depend on the country...)

[jemmalynette]

Yay, you read it! Thank you so much, glad you're enjoying it :D And I do plan to continue soon :D

Ahh, I was worrying about this. He's supposed to be 17, but I can make him younger :'p Is that too old for foster care in America?

[sakura_no_mi]

I think 18 is the cutoff for foster care here. I'm probably just confused about Peter's age 'cause the Heroes timeline is so sketchy, hehe. In my head, he should be like thirty-one by now, but that's according to the real world's timeline :D

[jemmalynette]

Yeah it's the same here too.

Yeah. isn't Milo thirty-one? The reason is because I remember looking up Peter's age and I read he was 26 in season one (however, don't know how reliable the site was) which would mean, four seasons on, he's 30ish? It was an estimate anyway. Hopefully people won't notice if it's wrong, lol! Otherwise I'm gonna get all OCD about it :P

[game_byrd]

To some of the other comments

[jemmalynette]

I wish I had you when I started writing this, lol! Thank you so much for the information!! I might not be giving a lot more mention to the foster home though in future chapters. ;)

I totally failed with the age/timeline thing *facepalm*

Thank you! ♥