Fic: Selfish (Sherlock)

Nov 23, 2010 18:35

Title: Selfish
Fandom: BBC Sherlock
Characters: Sherlock Holmes/John Watson/Mycroft Holmes
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Sequel to Greedy. The promised threesome.
Warnings: Graphic sex. Consensual incest. Mild bondage.

Selfish )

mycroft holmes, sherlock, sherlock holmes, slash, fic, john watson

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darthhellokitty November 23 2010, 09:09:39 UTC
DAMN!!!

OK, that was just one long porn, absolutely nothing else, and it was fantastic! All that was promised, and more!

They don't really ask John, do they? :-) I like the detail of duct taping his ankles to the table legs (leaving his socks on to avoid pain later), not so much to restrain him as to keep him in place.

It's especially nasty that the brothers never completely undress - Sherlock leaves his shirt on, and Mycroft hardly takes anything off - but John is naked almost immediately. He's almost like a toy.

Sherlock holding John's hands and looking into his eyes and talking to him while Mycroft fucks him - VERY hot. Later, when he's actually holding John's ass open with his feet - MY GOD who would have guessed the brothers could cooperate so well?

I like the ending - Sherlock will share him with Mycroft, but John is HIS. Just as it should be.

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kozibot November 23 2010, 16:54:09 UTC
Icon is oddly appropriate. I kinda think it was made for this (even though I know it wasn't)

HOT AS HELL, THIS WAS. <3

Lovely read. Thank you for sharing!

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jemisard November 24 2010, 06:22:52 UTC
Thank you for commenting!

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jemisard November 24 2010, 06:22:21 UTC
Yep. yep, it was basically a huge PWP.

John could say no at any point. He never does. He grumbles about being tired but never tells them no, never does anything to even suggest he's not okay with this, really. And yes, it is just to keep him in place.

Mycroft takes off his jacket! he doesn't even have his umbrella! He's as good as naked! And Sherlock... I just really like the image of him in just a loose shirt, being taken. But yes, they strip him down and play him like a well tuned instrument.

They can cooperate... when the outcome is worth it for both of them. And when Sherlock is assured that ownership is NOT in doubt.

Thank you for the comment, it was wonderful :D

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myszata November 23 2010, 10:36:11 UTC
Oh, that was fine, really fine and hot.
I like Mycroft's formal attitude. And sherlock is possesive about John ad that's good, really good. They are smart boys, they plan ahead ;D

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jemisard November 24 2010, 06:23:38 UTC
They plan everything ahead. Even Mycroft biting John to make Sherlock declare his ownership. ;)

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tiny_teaspoon November 23 2010, 11:09:52 UTC
Ö.Ö

*Speechlessness*

Please let the gates to hell open I'm right behind you...

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jemisard November 24 2010, 06:24:16 UTC
I'm long resigned to going to hell for writing this sort of stuff. this isn't half as twisted as some of the stuff I've written over the years.

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dragonmad November 23 2010, 11:56:27 UTC
Ngk.

Brb. Dead from ze hot.

(Though, psst. Typo near the end: "as Sherlock wrapped long arms and elgs" ;D)

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jemisard November 24 2010, 06:24:39 UTC
Yeah... that's what happens when I post with editing and immediately after I finish writing >_> Oops.

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jemisard November 24 2010, 06:32:12 UTC
That's the reaction I was aiming for!

The eye contact is one of my favourite things, that Sherlock holds John's gaze for so much of it. And the tie was inspired at the time, but I'm glad I put it in now :D

And yes, Sherlock and Mycroft had an arrangement for scratching mutual itches. That's it. That arrangement and their regular relationship have as good as nothing to do with each other. What they did together there was for John to feel that this was about him, not just being done to him.

Come stay with me in Hell. I've lived here a long time.

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jemisard November 27 2010, 03:14:07 UTC
That does sound like win win!

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