Fic: Just Unwell (Sherlock)

Nov 06, 2010 20:13

Title: Just Unwell
Fandom: BBC Sherlock
Characters: Sherlock Holmes, John Watson mention of Mycroft Holmes
Rating: 15+
Summary: John wakes up in an Institute and is told nothing from his his meeting with Mike Stamford onwards really happened. But is that world real... or this new one, and his carer, Jimmy? Written for this prompt.
Warnings: ( Read more... )

lestrade, jim moriaty, sherlock, sherlock holmes, fic, john watson

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ginbitch November 6 2010, 10:23:43 UTC
_beautifully_ judged! I love the fact that you make both worlds totally plausible so that even at the end I shared John's hopes and fears about his choice. The last line is absolutely perfect and the way you wove Lestrade and Mrs Hudson into the narrative worked seamlessly. So much respect!

<3

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jemisard November 8 2010, 04:34:16 UTC
I wanted the reader to feel with John, to understand his emotions and hope and fear and total confusion of what reality is and is not.

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chibi_nezu November 6 2010, 11:03:02 UTC
Love for this fic! You really did the prompt so much justice <3

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jemisard November 8 2010, 04:34:38 UTC
Thank you, darling. <3

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blaidd_drwg November 6 2010, 11:30:10 UTC
Oh, very well done! Even now I'm not sure which reality is the 'right' one.

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jemisard November 8 2010, 04:35:00 UTC
Maybe 'right' is only whatever makes John most happy.

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errantcomment November 6 2010, 11:40:47 UTC
Oh no. I'm perversely reminded of Bohemian Rhapsody, but this was still amazing.

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jemisard November 8 2010, 04:35:21 UTC
That's an interesting connection to draw....

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errantcomment November 8 2010, 07:19:39 UTC
"Is this real life? Is it just fantasy, caught in a landslide, no escape from reality..."
Yeah.
I dunno. My mind, it is like tangled wool.

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jemisard November 9 2010, 00:44:17 UTC
Okay, that makes sense.

Because the bit I was thinking about made a lot less sense, especially as sung by muppets.

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lenap_trap November 6 2010, 11:52:23 UTC
OHHH..... that was brilliant till the very end i was doubting)))
very-very good)) thanks))

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jemisard November 8 2010, 04:37:06 UTC
You're welcome and thank you.

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