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jelazakazone

Drabble prompt 3

May 26, 2012 10:46

Here are my rules for the drabbles. 100 words. No less. No more. Write for 15 minutes. You can use my prompt or not, as you wish. Write in whatever language you like. Can be fanfic, original, poetry, non-fiction. The point here is to loosen up. Try not to edit too much. Think of these as imperfect cookies: they may not look ( Read more... )

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Abomination jelazakazone May 26 2012, 16:44:04 UTC

Merlin watched Arthur’s eyes widen in comprehension and then horror.

“You’re an abomination.”

The hoarse words cut him deeply. Merlin closed his eyes against the pain of Arthur’s condemnation. Then, he steeled himself.

“Gaius told me I’m not a monster.”

Arthur gaped. Merlin watched him thinking. As the moments passed, he started to hope that maybe this wasn’t the end. Of everything. Until Arthur turned around and walked out.

Merlin was sure this was now the end. And then Arthur came back. He caught Merlin’s gaze, holding him there. Merlin’s heart was beating hard.

“You idiot. You’re my best friend.”

Re: Abomination neyah444 May 26 2012, 17:12:34 UTC

Oh, that was sooo cute. And fluffy.:D

Re: Abomination jelazakazone May 26 2012, 17:13:39 UTC

*facepalm* I know. I can't help myself. I mean, I'm trying to be less fluffy, but ....

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

Re: Abomination neyah444 May 26 2012, 17:17:36 UTC

Don't try! I love your fluff:D

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Freya's curse neyah444 May 26 2012, 17:11:52 UTC

She tried hard to deny it, but she was a monster. She had killed every night since she had gotten the curse, but somehow she was able to distance her from the Thing.

The truth hit her hard and even the Bastet trembled when she saw herself through Merlin’s eyes. How could he look at her with such acceptance and love? She should be dead if her fate was to destroy everything she loved around her.

Her true nature was reflected in Merlin’s gaze and though she hated herself, for a moment she felt beautiful. His love made her beautiful.

Re: Freya's curse jelazakazone May 26 2012, 17:12:58 UTC

*flails* Look at that! It's a lovely lovely ending. True, it's full of angst until the last five words, but so lovely.

Re: Freya's curse neyah444 May 26 2012, 17:18:52 UTC

I usually write happy endings. Angsty stuff with a fluffy end. I'm so happy you like it. I just got home and I thought that I'd participate even though I'm late to this party. AGAIN!:D

But I'm really happy that you like it.

Re: Freya&#39;s curse jelazakazone May 26 2012, 17:20:06 UTC

*snort* You are not late to the party at all. I only posted this a couple hours ago. I just wrote my own drabble shortly before you posted yours.

Also, I think you need a Freya icon. You write her so beautifully.

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