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jelazakazone

Weeds PWP

Oct 15, 2011 15:15

Title: Weeds PWP
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fanfic, dragonspeak, writing, arthur, merlin

Comments 10

lillibet October 15 2011, 19:30:24 UTC

Are you looking for feedback? Not being familiar with the show, I can't speak to that part of it, but on the writing front I've got a couple of ideas if you want them.

jelazakazone October 15 2011, 19:32:26 UTC

You have my email, yes? Shoot me an email. I'm not going to fix this, but I would (theoretically) like to fix the longer story. I'd rather discuss fixes in email than on this post:D

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jelazakazone October 15 2011, 22:36:05 UTC

Did it hang together ok for you here? lillibet gave me some great suggestions for when I try to write this again (from scratch:)).

Talk to me about what really worked for you.

archaeologist_d October 16 2011, 17:54:22 UTC

I liked the humor at the end. Good job with this.

jelazakazone October 16 2011, 17:56:04 UTC

Hee:D Thanks. lewisian_gneiss said the same thing (I assume you are talking about the "special whistle" here). I've been trying to incorporate humor into the pieces as well as serious stuff because that's what I love about the show so much.

ghrelin December 8 2011, 07:58:30 UTC

This was quite nice, it made me smile. I'd always thought it was hot as fuck when Merlin got all dragon-lordy, the contrast is always so powerful between the 'idiot servant' and the legendary wizard Merlin is fated to be.

jelazakazone December 8 2011, 12:06:01 UTC

Thank you! I love dragonlordy Merlin. *fans self* He's so hot. I wish I could actually write dragonspeak!kink.

ghrelin December 8 2011, 12:28:21 UTC

I am way too in love with Merlin and Arthur. yay for time off from work, spent way more time than I should watching vids about them and fangirling. I think there's so much legend and background on dragons that hasn't been used in this show that has so much potential. But instead it's all 'and now sneaky morgana did this.' And it's like

Gaius: "Merlin, you must promise me you won't __."

*five microseconds later* Gaius: "Merlin, I told you not to __!"

Merlin: "But I had to! Because of x reason!"

dunderklumpen January 17 2012, 07:02:20 UTC

Tehe... I bet Merlin will use his power more often now that he know the effect it has on Arthur;P

jelazakazone January 17 2012, 13:34:57 UTC

:) Merlin is judicious in his use of dragonspeak. The end of my merlinadvent pieces features some more dragonspeak. http://jelazakazone.livejournal.com/tag/challenge will get you there pretty easily. Check out the last three three days of Melrinadvent.

Thanks!