Comments | jejungim: fire and the desire

jejungim

fire and the desire

Aug 07, 2011 23:44

fire and the desire ☆ [oneshot]
Pairing: Yunho/Jaejoong
Rating: NC-17 ( Read more... )

pairing: jaejoong/yunho, title: fire and the desire

Comments 82

jaeho37 August 7 2011, 22:36:21 UTC

Wow that was HOT !!!! I've Always love this scenrio when jaejae is the shy kid and yunho the hot sexy hunk YUM ;)

jejungim August 10 2011, 19:42:01 UTC

yep, I like it too ^^
thanks for commenting and reading!

ultamatempa August 7 2011, 23:12:50 UTC

yunho sure is patient, waiting 2 months....freaking hot! *fans self*

jejungim August 10 2011, 19:46:49 UTC

right? :ú
I agree ^^
thanks for commenting and reading!

brownbox72 August 7 2011, 23:29:38 UTC

ohh so sexy!

Yunho, you piece of sex, always so damn good.

jejungim August 10 2011, 19:48:31 UTC

Yungo is so sexy indeed ^^
thanks for reading and commenting!

dongwook August 8 2011, 00:07:24 UTC

Damnn.. MAKE A SEXUEL!!!!
THIS WAS FUXKING HOT

jejungim August 10 2011, 19:51:26 UTC

we will see, if I will write a "sexuel", haha ^^
thanks for reading and commenting!

lookonlyatme October 4 2011, 02:41:46 UTC

@GAYPOP You would comment here soulmate LOL & since were like sisters, I'm commenting in your area. haha

@Jejungim, you did a wonderful smut story. I loved it and request a sexuel sequel as well. ♥ hahaha :) Thanks for a wonderful story~!

devilaugh August 8 2011, 03:09:21 UTC

Hmm, that was interesting. Didn't really care for the POV changes, but the sex was so sensual and hot!

jejungim August 10 2011, 19:55:05 UTC

I wrote these POV's changes, to just make sure, that readers won't be lost in story ^^
anyways I'm glad you enjoyed it ♥
thanks for reading and commenting!