Fic: Til the Lines Blur, (Cook/Archuleta), [NC-17]

[jehane_writes]

’Til the Lines Blur
Cook/Archuleta, explicit, 4,800 words.
Thoughtful, helpful beta by sir_yessir and frackin_sweet.
Dave makes Archie lose his breath.

Written to spec for fieryrogue, for her long-ago cookleta graphic challenge win, because this apparently hits all her kinks. Also, happy belated birthday, babe; I always lose my breath around you. ♥

Belt bondage, breath control play, don

Comments

[jehane_writes]

So, I am actually very vanilla IRL, and had no idea how to set up a plausible breath play scenario, until I remembered Adam and the snake. (And then I wondered if there'd be animal rights sensitivities in using a snake to kickstart someone's breath kink, lmao.)

I am so glad the guys' voices worked for you, because I try to make the POV in character even (especially) under what would be unusual circumstances - and that the resolution was satisfying, because I tried to make it so :) Thanks for your kind words, dear.

[mrsachid]

hi ms jay!

so i was like a minor and went to the website cos I have no idea what the choking thing was about.
I think recently came up on our island about a bunch of kids doing it right?

really, people do it?
* clutches her blue Ventolin inhaler like a virgin*

ok innocence and ignorance aside, i like all powerful!Cook in charge when he did the choking thingie, although I couldn't picture Archie in black leather with snakes. That's for the Adams, Levine and Lambert.

And also, I feel like this archie is like an extension of all the Archies that you wrote, like AIRN and the sex club fic , does that make sense? it's like he is the same archie in all your fics? Dark, sexy yet innocent.

loved the fluffy bits where Cook worries about hurting him, you know I'm a sucker for Hurt/Comfort so pleasewritemoreplease?

ilu,bb. <3<3 :D

[mrsachid]

hehe, sorry didnt meant to demand you to write more, i just enjoyed this one very much!

*hides*

[jehane_writes]

Totally okay, doll. I getcha :)

[jehane_writes]

I think my favorite thing to write about Arch is that he's on the cusp of becoming, if that makes sense. He was a sheltered, religious teen that's become a man, and I want to see him discover all these things about life and love and sex that you discover when you reach adulthood.

With that in mind, betas always tell me not to make him too deer-in-headlights ingenue, and I guess I always have that in front of me when I write him. The Arch I want to write about and to read about might not be worldly or cynical, but he's smart and loving and knows what he wants and is becoming more confident every day. Or, possibly Arch sounds the same in all my kinky fic and reacts to kink in the same way :)))

[brokenscreamx]

Breath!play is probably one of my favorite kinks ever omg!

I dont even have a coherent thought at the moment! omg amazing bb!

[jehane_writes]

I'm glad it worked for you, bb! (Hope you play safe, if you play!)

[penrith1]

Really enjoyed how you handled this. I thought Archie was more mature here and the relationship at a place where they can ask for things of each other.

When Cook started to agree to the breathe play I was thinking to myself they need a safe word and I was worried. But then you did just that. Made it safe by Cook setting some rules and not just going into this scene haphazardly. So way to go J. You alway hit the spot with me.

[jehane_writes]

Hi, you! Glad it worked for you :) You know me, I'm going to worry about is this safe, how do I make this at all realistic, etc. I want the boys to negotiate safely and feel safe enough to ask things of each other, as any couple exploring kink should be. And, thank you ♥

[fieryrogue]

Jaaaaaayyy. JAY. Jaaay. I don't even know what to say. This is basically perfect because it's sexy-hot and also sexy-safe. :) Good boys we've got there. Haha, Archiiie, you are surprising, bb. I love when he has secret kinky kinks. xD OMG! The snake! Haha, that was beautiful, good show. You're good at making a ~story out of pr0n, I love it. ♥ Also, Archie's pants. CHURCH PANTS, I'M SURE. And Cook's beeeeelllt. So supple, hot off his waist. UNF.

Oh gosh, I don't know what else. Thank you so much! I know it must have been difficult, ack. You are my hero. It's very good, I swear to you.

Also, no one do this at home. NO, REALLY. For idealistic fic scenarios only. *rainbow of knowledge*

[jehane_writes]

I AM SO RELIEVED YOU LIKED IT, OMG. YES, it was difficult to get all your kinks in there - especially the belt thing, because the links said it was good for the subs to have their hands free so they could tap out! And then I thought the three count might work in lieu of tapping, so.

Also I thought the snake might get you, haha :)))

I swear to you.

HEE, HERE I COME WITH AFFIDAVITS OF EXCELLENCE FOR YOU TO SIGN.