Comments | jeffreycwells: Tales of the Starbuck Avenger!!! (65)

jeffreycwells

Tales of the Starbuck Avenger!!! (65)

Jul 25, 2010 22:41

It's amazing how long it takes me to work up the gumption to write a simple action sequence. WRITING IS HARD.

Anyway...

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( Beginninggame, Part 4… )

writings, starbuck avenger

Comments 10

wallycaine July 26 2010, 04:08:42 UTC

Whoooooo hooooooo! Yay for Starbuck!

I don't really have anything else to say, other than that it was awesome, and I love the cat, personally.

jeffreycwells July 27 2010, 17:34:01 UTC

Thanks for reading and feeding back! Yeah, I've got a soft spot for CC. See below.

blackbyrd2 July 26 2010, 04:32:02 UTC

Yay! Nice fix for the Jonesin'. :)

jeffreycwells July 27 2010, 17:33:09 UTC

Glad to provide.

packbat July 26 2010, 04:36:44 UTC

Channel Cat!

jeffreycwells July 27 2010, 17:32:42 UTC

CC really is underutilized in this story. If a mutated version of this ever turns into something publishable (unlikely, as the changes required to turn this from a trademark-unfriendly serial into a publishable novel are daunting ones) he'll probably get a bigger role. Or else he'll just do the canon immigrant thing to another story.

johnwwells July 27 2010, 03:00:21 UTC

jeffreycwells July 27 2010, 17:29:07 UTC

So you should always second-guess yourself when dealing with aliens. Good to know.

feech July 28 2010, 04:27:45 UTC

I totally sympathize on the action sequences. :/

Is Mebby using more commas the past few parts, talking differently while super-heroing, or is that something you changed in your typing?

Looking forward to more, as always!

jeffreycwells August 2 2010, 19:31:56 UTC

Sometimes it takes me a little while to get back into Mebby's type-style. I might go back and clean some of those up. But it's also true that she doesn't break as hard when she's in the middle of action sequences, so I'll have to see.