This is going to come out *sounding* like a critique, and I've loved the flow as things move in the last few chapters especially, but I still want to say it.
I keep feeling Avenger's Track and Field is somewhere between a compartmentilization to make problem solving easier, and how an editor realizing they're two issues level in a seven-arc run and they really need to get to the fight scene would manifest itself 'in-world'.
I have some interesting thoughts about Track and Field, and where, exactly, it came from, but I'm just going to sit on that for a while. Also, even though this was all expo, it was awesome expo.
You know, at some point I'm going to want a hard copy of this. Just so's you know and can keep that in mind. :)
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I keep feeling Avenger's Track and Field is somewhere between a compartmentilization to make problem solving easier, and how an editor realizing they're two issues level in a seven-arc run and they really need to get to the fight scene would manifest itself 'in-world'.
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Also, even though this was all expo, it was awesome expo.
You know, at some point I'm going to want a hard copy of this. Just so's you know and can keep that in mind. :)
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