Comments | jedi_penguin: House Fic: Careful What You Ask For; NC-17

jedi_penguin

House Fic: Careful What You Ask For; NC-17

Nov 27, 2006 10:52

Title: Careful What You Ask For
Author: shelley
Pairing: House/Stacy, Stacy/Cuddy + House
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 5,804
Summary: Before his infarction, House never believed that love and manipulation had anything to do with each other. He knows better now.
Disclaimer: David Shore owns all; I own naught. *emo tear*
Huge thanks to jesmel for hand ( Read more... )

femslash, cuddy, house, fic, stacy

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jedi_penguin November 29 2006, 15:18:21 UTC

I truly couldn't have done it without you. Thank you!

joanne_c November 29 2006, 06:06:03 UTC

OOooh I loved this! Very well written and god, House is so House here. I can totally see this happening. And I loved the femslash. Gorgeously done.

jedi_penguin November 29 2006, 15:20:03 UTC

Thank you! *huge sigh of relief* I'm so glad it worked for somebody who has written femslash and is more comfortable in that corner of fandom than I am. You have no idea how happy I am to hear that you liked it. *hugs you*

tweedisgood November 29 2006, 19:39:45 UTC

Sorry. I know I said I'd read this but only now have a proper moment to properly comment. Can I just echo the above who have said how very Housey this House is: unfluffy, unsparing, angry, raw,a total MCP, yet terribly self-aware, diagnosing his reactions as much as having them. I like how you keep dangling before him what he thinks he wants and is in control of and then snatching it away. The contrasts and continuities between Stacy/House and Stacy/Cuddy and the halting breath climax were dead on - the shouting out the name is such a fic cliche IMO , and turning the lame male porn fantasy of "making her scream" on its head was a clever and character-pinpointing connection.

Just excellent! Well done, you.

ijemanja December 3 2006, 03:27:57 UTC

Ooh. I pretty much just love everything about this. I love the spin on the prompt, how it's supposed to be about him, but it isn't, and how House isn't the only injured party here. But what I really love is the characterisation - your House voice never falters for a second, and it is so clearly the House of that time, just after the infarction, in transition towards being the House we know today. I'm so glad I got to read this, thanks.

quasiradiant December 5 2006, 16:03:26 UTC

DUDE. i got here through ijemanja. this was AWESOME. and extremely hot. and cuddy/stacy/house is my new favorite thing ever.