Chocolate fic for astrangerenters, PART 3

[cupid_johnny]

To: astrangerenters
From: cupid_johnny

Title: I fell for you like the stars.
Pairing: Kitagawa Keiko/Sakurai Sho, mentions of Kanjiya Shihori/Matsumoto Jun, Aiba Masaki/Becky and if you squint, Kitagawa Keiko/Yamashita Tomohisa.
Rating: PG
Summary: Keiko talks to ghosts. And then she meets Sho.
A/N: To astrangerenters, I sort of might have thrown together some prompts and tried to

Comments

[nicefinalbeam]

I just want the author of this to know that it is absolutely wonderful. ♥ I wish I could say more than that but I'll get too emotional, so! :) Great job.

[astrangerenters]

Ahhhhh he's in a coma and not dead yet! This reminds me now of that movie with Mark Ruffalo and Reese Witherspoon. Just Like Heaven? Ahhhhhhh I loved that cheesy ass movie.

Anyhow I'm mad at Sho too for not telling her the truth. I'm on your side, Keiko!!

I was waiting for Ohno to make an appearance, I'm glad he's around too :)

I am so !!!!!!! about her going to visit Sho in the hospital over and over again. Oh Keiko, you are breaking and warming my heart simultaneously!!

I love how Keiko is finding herself and gaining confidence through her writing and traveling. I also like that she is obviously watching Indiana Jones LOL

I'm so emotional about her wanting him to be happy even if she's not a part of his life. Oh poor Keiko!! Quit playing games with my heart, author!

Yay Shihori and Jun are getting married <3

[phrenk]

This is lovely! In a fic that is so much about the premise (and later, the various places Keiko goes), it's wonderful how much I loved the characters themselves. Ohno really stole my heart in this last part, but Keiko and Sho were the real stars, of course. I adored them together. And Keiko and Shihori and their fabulous friendship, fdjslkfsdkj, GOOD. <3<3 Thank you for sharing! ♥

[a_horsie]

Thank you for writing and sharing this story. I really enjoyed reading it.

It was very lovely to follow how Keiko "found" herself. The way she travels across the globe was really well-written and it felt like we were part of that journey.

[melonpaan]

Anon, I wonder if you've watched the kdrama Master's Sun, because bits of this (especially the beginning bits) remind me a lot of it. And while it remains one of the best kdramas I've ever seen, stupid last two episodes not withstanding, I feel like I love your Keiko as a nonchalant, ghost-seeing heroine so much more! I love that even though she's a hermit, she's best friends with Shihori (sunshine and moonbeam are the cutest bestie nicknames EVER, btw) and that she wants to do everything for Shihori, even de-ghost the restaurant of her purple-pants-wearing boyfriend. All the relationships in this were really great, from the besties Keiko/Shihori, to the obnoxiously adorable Jun/Shihori, to the poignant Keiko/Yamapi, to the hilarious then sweet and hilariously sweet and then SUPER SAD but then you made it all better Keiko/Sho. The ongoing themes of storytelling, (falling) stars, rebirth, and travel really resonated throughout, and that last section all about Keiko's travels was especially well-written and so great in that she was,