Chocolate Fic for kanarazu

[cupid_johnny]

To: kanarazu
From: cupid_johnny

Title: Super!
Pairing: Matsumoto Jun/Inoue Mao
Rating: G
Summary: Jun lost control; Mao would help him relearn it. (Smallville-ish AU?)
A/N: Superman!Jun and Lois!Mao from the Smallville AU (but you could read this stuff without any prior knowledge of the series.) There may be some character inconsistencies due to the fusion. I

Comments

[kanarazu]

Oh my goodness! A Smallville inspired JunMao fic? Do my eyes deceive me? :D

I can't begin to tell you how much I loved this! And I'm flattered that you were inspired by my Smallville Clois fics. ♥ I wasn't expecting this and I was very much surprised! I love how Mao is so competitive with Jun to the point of passing out in the pool just because she wants to win. And it was priceless the way she tried to roundhouse kick him in the face. It felt there was a bit of Makino in her too! ^_^

I love how you wrote Jun. Equal parts dorky and take-charge. :) I do think that Jun could effectively play a superhero with a secret identity and it doesn't hurt that he looks good in glasses, so he can play a nerdy reporter really well.

Thank you so much for this fic!!! ♥

[astrangerenters]

Cute! I love Mao's competitiveness and when Jun's powers backfire a bit (like his x-ray vision LOL)

[dalampasigan]

I love how this fic is divided into Jun's super powers. I totally cracked up when Mao lost consciousness because she was too competitive!

[phrenk]

This is adorable! I love how it showcased Jun's powers one by one while having him fall for Mao. I can totally see her as a stubborn, nosy reporter, and he is great as the frustrated hero trying to control his own body. They're so cute! Thank you for sharing! ♥

[gomushroom]

Ah. It's Smallville AU?! :D I can totally see journalist Jun in dark-rimmed glasses. And he is just helplessly in love with Mao for the whole duration of this fic, it's just very cute and lovely. I love the brisk style you use, giving the chance to explore all Jun's power and how it gradually deepens his relationship with Mao. Lovely! ;)