Chocolate Fic for phrenk, Part Three

[cupid_johnny]

To: phrenk
From: cupid_johnny

Title: Order Up
Pairing: Sasakura Ryu/Kurushima Miwa (Bartender)
Rating: NC-17
Summary: A series of vignettes charting the course of Ryu and Miwa's relationship. Set post-series and contains spoilers.

Comments

[tinyangl]

Oh god. This was perfection. I absolutely adored Bartender, and while I enjoyed the ending, my shipping heart wasn't fully satisfied. But thanks to you, thanks to THIS, oh man, I am ridiculously happy. You perfectly captured Miwa and Ryu, and I love how they finally got together, and all that entailed. I enjoyed every bit of this fic and thank you so much for putting a perfect end to their story. ♥

[astrangerenters]

I was thoroughly unsatisfied with how it ended. I mean, he gives her a piggyback ride at one point in the drama and we're left at the end with them just smiling at each other? Come on, this needed to be remedied :)

Thank you!!

[mayezinha]

...And this is what Bartender was missing.
Because Miwa totally deserved more of Ryu's attention. XD
Loved the cocktails between snippets and the descriptions on every situation and the characterization.
Thanks a lot for sharing!

[astrangerenters]

This is DEFINITELY what this drama was missing *perverted laughter*

I'm glad the cocktail structure worked for you! So much of the show revolved around the perfect cocktails to match a situation, so that helped guide me. Thanks!

[yumenosete]

OMNOMNOM

I don't remember enjoying Bartender as much as the other commenters but I think I need to re-watch it after this. I think I remember being frustrated with the Ryu and Miwa relationship so this. is. PERFECT

The drinks that hints about what's to come, how you didn't actually stopped at the confession and Ryu accepting everything, but also the hot, hot sex scenes that accomanied their relationship in the span of a year.

In short, I love everything in here! (Even your comment at Aiba's Bartender face LOL) ♥

[astrangerenters]

LOL you'll rewatch it and go "JUST KISS ALREADY" because that is what I was doing the whole time I was rewatching all their scenes to prep for this. And I'm happy the drink names gave you some hints hahaha, I think I had 'Harvey Wallbanger' first and then had to go hunting for others to match up :)

Thank you!!

[natsunonamae]

...okay. OKAY.

I wish I could write you a long, long comment about how this bowled me over and charmed me, but doing so would entail me just copy-pasting a lot of lines. But please know that this was wonderfully written, and my god, MY GOD, if I loved the pairing of Ryu/Miwa x Aiba/Shihori then, I'm absolutely head-over-heels with it now. You just put in the right amounts of tenderness and hesitation and heat that it got my head spinning, and omigod. Ryu in shirts being all sexy and Miwa being adorable and bothered and turned on, ahhhhhhh. So much swooning. THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL, TYVM

/ugly tears

[astrangerenters]

This pairing needs so much love, why have we been so neglectful as a fandom? I blame myself because I should have written Ryu/Miwa SO MUCH SOONER LOL.

Glad you enjoyed it, thank you :)

[nicefinalbeam]

GOOD.

Just...

GOOD.

[astrangerenters]

LOL thank you very much :)