Chocolate Fic for frostbittenlove

[cupid_johnny]

To: frostbittenlove
From: novemberbaby

Title: Stolen
Pairing: Sakurai Sho/Horikita Maki, a dash of Nino/Meisa
Rating: G
Summary: Maki has her heart stolen by a nameless, coffee-drinking, newspaper-reading guy. Sho has his stolen by a girl who smiles too much.
A/N: For frostbittenlove. I believe nothing will ever beat the gem that you received last year! I’m terribly afraid that you might

Comments

[astrangerenters]

This was super cute! I liked how awkward and shy they were, slowly getting to know one another :)

[novemberbaby]

I'm glad you like this! Thank you for reading and commenting. ♥

[literarylemming]

So sweeeeeeeeeet!

And as if Sho/Maki didn't make it wonderful enough, you've also got AiBecky AND Ohno/Katase Nana! It's like I've died and gone to heaven!

[novemberbaby]

I love your icon. That signature magenta coat and Tamura's look. ♥

Well if that heaven consists all those adorable pairings then I think I'd join you too. They need more love, don't you think? They do, they do!

Thank you for reading and commenting!

[frostbittenlove]

HI ANON-SAN. *A*

Please don't brick me if I say that I think I know you (or perhaps you know someone who is close to me) but I LOVED THIS. And I will be back with a proper flail because I am ninja-ing from work which I really shouldn't be doing but I'm doing it because I don't want to give you the impression that I do not like it because I REALLY LIKE IT and that I WILL BE BACK to comment on the details because seriously, Sho and Maki on their own are awesomesauce already, and them together, them getting together, gah *AAAA*

Thank you for writing this ♥ and I really mean it. And I will be back with a proper comment. \:D/

[novemberbaby]

So you've figured me out even before reveals. LOL. I was trying to make it not so obvious but as you've said the whole dancing and spinning under the starlight part gave me away. I HAVE NO REGRETS. But I will blame it on Sho and the song because how could I not put that in there when I was writing about a particular fateful Friday afternoon?

I'm still glad that you like it. ♥ And maybe I'll be able to surprise you next time. Kukuku.

[crescentharpe]

So I was reading this at a coffee shop and its perfect &hearts The slow development of their relationship makes my heart flutter with my favorite cup of coffee in hand. :)

[novemberbaby]

Thanks for sharing this detail. Sometimes I wonder where people are when they read my writing. I'm a bit nosy like that, haha. On the contrary, I was drinking mostly tea when I was writing this during late nights and early weekend mornings. :D

[phrenk]

Ah, so sweet. ♥ I liked everyone in this and the setting and the slow progression of things. I especially loved Maki's point of view and how she is just so smitten with Sho. And Nino/Meisa are tauntingly fascinating in this; I'd love to know more! :D But mostly the Maki/Sho is sweet and slow and just right. Thank you for sharing! ♥

[novemberbaby]

Nino and Meisa were supposed to have bigger roles and a side story of their own, but I thought they would overshadow Maki and Sho. Maybe someday when I'm free again I'd work on their story. :)

Thank you for reading. ♥