Chocolate Fic for ginzarhapsody

[cupid_johnny]

To: ginzarhapsody
From: tinyangl

Title: Assignment
Pairing: Akanishi Jin/Aragaki Yui, hints of Domoto Koichi/Toda Erika
Rating: PG
Summary: [AU] Jin doesn't think much of Yui until he meets her.
A/N: For ginzarhapsody. I hope you enjoy this! It was a bit of a struggle to write, but I hope the end result is satisfying. Happy White Day

Comments

[ginzarhapsody]

Wow. Where do I even begin?!

Simple and yet crafted with care. Stylistically, I loved the details. The fact that Jin's folder was blue. The way Jin omits his history for Yui. Jin flailing with the beer bottle in his hand about his initial Yui meeting. The glimpses into Jin and Erika's working relationship.

I loved how you crafted the AU here with it being a slight AU (my favorite!!) with a what if Jin didn't join JE. I approve muchly of the fact that of course Jin and YamaPi would still be BFF and Jin being a songwriter is totally suited to him in a sort of surprisingly way. :) And again, the nuanced incorporation of one of Jin's real solo songs, "Care"? Nice nice touch. :D I liked how we really were thrown into this world, with very little explanation as to how Jin got to the place he's at, because really, it's so peripheral and unneeded. In a way, it allows you just to get caught up in the present narrative. That said, I love how present the fic feels; it flows with ease and doesn't feel heavy, just a real slice of life

[ginzarhapsody]

OHMIGOD IT WAS YOU, TIN YANGL! ♥ I LOVE YOU. :333333

[tinyangl]

This was possibly the best comment I have ever gotten in the history of comments. Peyton, oh Peyton. I loved this comment so much that I reread it countless amount of times before reveals and probably going to keep re-reading even after reveals. Just amazing. I can see how much thought you put into this and I LOVE IT SO MUCH. ♥♥♥ I'm just so happy you liked your fic this much.

[myxstorie]

This was GORGEOUS. I adore how you write Jin, and how Yui wins him over without even trying. I'm not really a fan of Yui, even, but you wrote this so beautifully that I was :)

Jin shutting off Erika's mic just as she starts ranting was a hilarious image and made me laugh out loud on the bus (as I'm reading on my phone) xDD;;;

AND THEN PIN PLAY VIDEO GAMES XD I think that is one of my favourite scenes in fic >_>

Oh. Oh wow. I. Care. I honestly gasped out loud and now I'm trying so hard not to cry.

This was so, so beautiful, I can't stress enough just how much I love this. I think you may have made a jin/yui fan of me <3

[tinyangl]

FLAIL!!! <3 I'm so happy that somehow I made you like Yui even though you're not really her fan. That gives me so many smiles~ I seem to write her a lot (since Peyton's a die-hard Aragaki fan) so I love making people see her awesome~

Your comment made me grin so hard. I didn't realize using Care would have such a reaction on people, but it makes me glad that I ended up choosing it. <33333 Thank you so much~

[lineelu2001]

PIN friendship, Erika's diva-ness, Koichi-kun constantly keeping Jin in his place and CARE, CAREEEEEEE.

Love, love, love this so much! Thank you~~~!

[tinyangl]

Heee!!! Thank you so much for the comment, dear! I really really appreciated it. ♥♥♥

[lastingdreams8]

This entire fic was gorgeous, so real, and so detailed, and just fun to read :D
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The pressure from Koichi's hand lessens.
Seeing Koichi's subtle care, in a very sempai-like manner, makes my heart go *kyun* :DDD

Jin allows himself to wonder if Yui's cried as much as she's smiled.
Wow, that's such a poetic line! :)

The remote slips from his hand and Jin cringes as he watches Wario crash into a wall and Yamapi's Luigi zoom past him to win first place. Jin growls, leaning back on his couch. “You did that on purpose.”
LOL AWESOME! :P