Chocolate Fic for jain

Mar 17, 2010 12:18

To: jain
From: myxstorie

Title: A Love That Lasts
Pairing: Yamashita Tomohisa/Tokiwa Takako
Rating: PG
Summary: Sometimes, love fades over time, but sometimes, it only gets stronger.
A/N: For jain, I hope you like this! I loved these two in Long Love Letter together, so I couldn't resist them as a pairing! Much love to E, B, P and everyone else for helping me with ( Read more... )

*rating: pg, yamashita tomohisa/tokiwa takako, **year: 2010

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kitsune714 March 18 2010, 07:20:29 UTC
myxstorie March 23 2010, 02:27:24 UTC
Thank you so much! Your comment is so lovely, I really appreciate it ♥

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javiera March 18 2010, 15:46:53 UTC
I did watched Long Love Letter, I LOVE it. And I like Tokiwa Takako a lot because of it, she and Yamapi had such great chemistry on it! So when I saw there was gonna be a fic about them I jumped in joy! And it was even better reading it! I particularly liked how she could read him so well, as a kid and as a grown up, and how they could make conversation so easily, both things are very important to make the relationship work and be believable. Great fic! :D

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myxstorie March 23 2010, 02:28:08 UTC
:DDD I got SO excited when I saw you'd commented here! ♥ THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING! I LOVE that drama so much ♥

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javiera March 23 2010, 03:16:42 UTC
Ha. No wonder I felt the urge to write a comment for this fic! I wasn't even that interested in reading the fics here this year, but I saw the pairing and I HAD to read it! I'm so glad you wrote it ^o^

I do wonder why you skipped the part when Takako-san managed to see Pi in all his naked glory when he was younger, cus really, that probably made a lasting impression!

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myxstorie March 23 2010, 09:17:58 UTC


XD Well, I've never seen the full drama of that, so I didn't want to go into too much detail about it without knowing what happened XD; Originally I had a comment from him that was something like 'it's nothing you haven't already seen' but I don't think I included that, did I? It didn't feel like it fit with the rest of the fic >_<;

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tinyangl March 19 2010, 15:22:14 UTC
This was gorgeous, ohmygod. Talk about an unlikely pairing but you TOTALLY MADE IT WORK. It flowed so beautifully and just that last line He always did love with all his heart made me totally wibble. T.T I lovelovelove it. ♥♥ And man does this call out to my LOVE of Long Love Letter. *___________* Thank you so much for writing this. ♥

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myxstorie March 23 2010, 02:29:11 UTC
kl;saldasdlfk THANK YOU ♥ You have no idea how much this comment means to me ;_; (and I might have spazzed out a little bit seeing you and ginzarhapsody praising it, too >_> ) Seriously, thank you so much <3

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