Chocolate Fic for sireensilver

Mar 16, 2010 12:32

To: sireensilver
From: ayumwu

Title: You’ll come a-experimenting with me, won’t you?
Pairing:Horikita Maki/Sakurai Sho
Rating:PG-13, just in case.
Summary:Have you ever fallen in love with a co-worker? I have. Oh, and I forgot to mention, she makes a fool of me all the time. L
A/N:For sireensilver. Just a dash of OOC-ness, just maybe. And there’s Arashi interaction, so, I hope ( Read more... )

**year: 2010, *rating: pg13, sakurai sho/horikita maki

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frostbittenlove March 16 2010, 18:15:40 UTC
I... am spazzing right now because omg, anon-san, I've been craving ShoxMaki the past few months thanks to Kabachi!! ;A;

Lovely, brilliant. :D Maki taking charge is just so Sumiyoshi and Sho, Captain Failboat just failing to comprehend what was happening and freezing up (gosh he is really a lot like Tamura) and that last line from him to Jun and that collective sigh was sjkahdsd *squee* I would've liked to know what had happened afterward. (Of course, Sho would fail or something along those lines, but sjklfhds that'd be totally an endearing sort of fail.) Arashi cameo was epic (as usual) and that moment when Nino pulled Ohno up to go home and that kicking stuff out of the way to get to Ohno and that toodles, guys from him was so random but eeeee so Nino. :Dv

On second thought, this is just as cute as it comes, even if I'm left to wonder what would happen 7 PM, tomorrow night, sharp. ♥ I can almost hear the music of 「Troublemaker」 rolling at the end credits, like they do it in Kabachi ( ... )

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ayumwu March 23 2010, 05:35:12 UTC
SO. Apparently you wrote the Shige in a Yakuza fic. LJ was messing with me that day so I couldn't get a comment in, but A;LKDSFJ;ALSJFD FLAILS I LOVED IT. ♥

And omg I heard Tamura-san was failboat to the END, because he got his jewels attacked after he kissed Maki. XDDDD

Though tbh I had to do a bit of research because srsly, I stopped watching it :O

Ahahaha, I would have written the next part, but that would pull to much creative juices from me and I'm all like ;o; work ;A;

or ppl can twistfic it afterwards? 8D 8D 8D 8D 8D

Thank you for reading and enjoying it!

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frostbittenlove March 23 2010, 23:31:38 UTC
akdljasd *flails* Y-yes I did write it jskldhsk *flails* THANK YOU! Glad you liked it ♥ But D'OH LET'S NOT TALK ABOUT IT IN YOUR FIC PAGE Y/Y? ^^;

YES he was failboat to the very end but sjkhd I WOULDN'T HAVE HIM ANY OTHER WAY 8D Sho has some pretty intense gazes at times that I shiver whenever the camera pans at his srs!look ;A;

D'awww, it's kinda rly episodic, but I LOVED IT ANYWAY because I have a major failboat bias (i.e., Sho, Shige) and Maki is my fave actress so yeah. ^^; And seeing Maki surrounded by men once again is just too cute, even if 3/4 of them are oyaji. LOLOL. You're awesome for writing this!

someone needs to twist this fic SFM. *calls on sireensilver lolol

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ayumwu March 24 2010, 03:05:40 UTC
Hahaha don't be shy! Yakuza!Shige is all sorts of cute. :D

Hahahahaha well Sho is like that. Failboat. XD IDK I pretty much shook my head at everything he did in the drama (though admittedly I didn't watch a lot of it *whistles*)

LOL WHO'RE YOU CALLING OLD?! XDDDDD Kidding. :P I love Shige!fail too, but every time White day rolls around I forget to put it in my application...rofl.

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♥♥♥♥♥ sireensilver March 16 2010, 18:46:01 UTC
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

This is me squealing and gloating because this fic is for me and I want to hold and and cuddle it and never let it go. ♥

This fic is so timely, what with my recent enjoyment of all things Sho/Maki. It was especially enjoyable since I could feel them channeling their drama characters too, but not in a bad way at all. And super plus points whenever Arashi is thrown into the mix. Especially when it's this endearing. The exasperation they felt at Sho fail was awesome, as was Maki having to take the initiative, as was... oh, I think pretty much all of it.

Thank you thank you thank you! ♥♥♥

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Re: ♥♥♥♥♥ ayumwu March 23 2010, 05:37:45 UTC
:D :D :D :D :D CUDDLE IT, NEVER LET IT GO. :D

Lol not like being exasperated at Sho isn't an everyday thing, y'know? ;D

Honestly, Maki would take it into her own hands, shape it into a really hard shape, and then chuck it back at Sho. Because she SO would.

I'm also glad that this didn't come off as cheesy, because I had such a hard time starting, you had no idea. I wrote a part of it first, then decided it was terrible and was going to scrap it but then miraculously it fit right into the second one I started writing XDDDD must be awesome Aiba-powers.

Thank you so much for liking it, you have no idea how relieved I am! XD

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pocariporii March 16 2010, 23:08:09 UTC
I can totally see Maki getting the courage and taking matters into her own hands by 'borrowing' Misuzu's sassy and fierce attitude into play!

Ahh...I would miss ShoMaki with TK coming to an end but luckily they would meet again in April for VS Arashi =D

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ayumwu March 23 2010, 05:39:02 UTC
Yes, yes, amirite? She's step ALL over Sho.

Ahahahahahah I was never informed of that. Srsly I hope Nino makes fun of the kiss.

Thank you for reading!

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xbriyeon March 16 2010, 23:16:20 UTC
ohgod, this is full of win. poor sho. ;D

“IJUSTHADTHESCARIESTCONFRONTATIONEVERCANYOUGETMEACAR?!”
i loved this line. xD;

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ayumwu March 23 2010, 05:39:46 UTC
XDDDDDD I felt it fitting. :Dv

And it's even more fitting that the rest of them can figure out what the heck he was saying, hahahahaha. ♥

Thank you for reading!

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xcry March 17 2010, 21:55:32 UTC
jl;kjljaf WAH.

This fic makes me love ShoMaki even more than Yamaki. It's so cute and Sho is just...FAIL. But he's cute!Fail. lol

Anon-san, you're awesome! =D

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ayumwu March 23 2010, 05:41:10 UTC
Hahaha, well tbh even I am getting tired of the Yamaki. Yamapi+anyone atm is kind of DNW for me right now (even though I am still a huge sucker for Kurosaki/Tsurara >.>) so this was kind of refreshing. (I didn't expect it to turn out kind of good either, rofl)

Thank you! Thank YOU for reading! :D

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