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Chocolate Fic for saengie

Mar 16, 2010 00:03

To: saengie
From: koneho

Title: This Could Be Your Love Song
Pairing: Akanishi Jin & YUI (singer)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: They meet because he becomes her fan. But the funny thing is, he's the rockstar and she's the no-name street musician.
A/N: When I saw this pairing listed on my recipient's list of what they'd like to receive, I had to write it; Jin and YUI ( Read more... )

akanishi jin/yui, **year: 2010, *rating: pg13

Comments 21

elanielyn March 15 2010, 17:52:33 UTC

This is just. Stunningly beautiful.

novemberbaby March 15 2010, 18:25:13 UTC

*takes a deep breath* This is lovely and that is an understatement but I can't find a better word to describe this story right now since my mind's melted into a puddle. Just...this makes me want to read it over and over again. :) I'm adding this to my memories.

novemberbaby March 18 2010, 04:20:03 UTC

So. It's my fifth read already. I'm still in love with this story very, very much. ♥

The recipient is so lucky to have this masterpiece. :)

tatoeba March 15 2010, 18:31:41 UTC

I kind of gasped when I saw this pairing. I'm not particularly a fan of Yui, but somehow I thought Jin/Yui would be a;sldkg beautiful together, and I just had to read this. It was wonderful. I don't even have the words to express it; your writing is gorgeous and there was just this lovely softness to the whole story that kind of transformed into this melancholy, hopelessness when they sort of "broke up". I loved the way you characterized Jin as the childish boy he really is whenever he was with Yui, how they hung around in parks on carousels and the jungle gyms and just. The descriptions of the singing and music were beautiful. Just everything about your writing is marvelous and this story and the plot and everything was so great. I was kind of in tears at the end. Absolutely brilliant, I can't even say. ♥

Thank you so much for writing and sharing this wonderful piece! ♥ I hope your recipient enjoys it as much as I did. :)

boycottbananas March 15 2010, 20:18:26 UTC

Beautiful. ♥

fivethreerin March 16 2010, 00:50:18 UTC

it makes me wish they really, really will end up happy.i want to root for them, because their characters are so strong and real and spoke to us so well... ^^ wonderful writing.