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Chocolate Fic for tinyangl

Mar 14, 2010 11:06

To: tinyangl
From: b2uty

Title: Alignment.
Pairing: Nishikido Ryo (NEWS) x Kashino Yuka (Perfume).
Rating: G.
Summary: They move like planets and crash like waves.
A/N: I really hope this makes sense.

( He puts the radio on. She turns it up. He turns it back down. She concedes the point. )

**year: 2010, nishikido ryo/kashino yuka, *rating: g

Comments 3

tinyangl March 14 2010, 15:27:08 UTC

FLAILFLAILFLAIL. I have never thought of Ryo/Kashiyuka together, but this was beyond gorgeous and totally has me shipping them. *_________* They'd have very beautiful children. But honestly, this was just amazing. The writing flowed so beautiful that I found myself taking in every word at a time because just GREAT. i lovelovelove how you wrote how they saw each other and some of their interactions, like the phototaking and the driving and oh the game of oni. SO CUTE. I would paste and flail lines but I'D HAVE EVERY LINE IN THIS STORY IN THIS COMMENT.

That said, the last line "They may not have carved their names on a tree, but they're carved just as plainly in the air between them.". Just gorgeous. omg, anon, I LOVE YOU SO SO SO MUCH. <3333333 (AND JUST FOR WRITING ME NEWS/PERFUME. FLAILLLLLLLLL!!!!!)

fivethreerin March 15 2010, 02:48:36 UTC

Everything is something more to her.

beautiful writing- the prose is breathtaking. ^^

miss_jelly March 15 2010, 03:35:45 UTC

I love your writing, it flowed easily and this was just wonderful to read.

"he takes the opportunity to drive safe and build up trust for later occasions when better conditions will mean he can go as fast as he likes" I don't know why, but that was just really cute, to me, something small but thoughtful and it made me smile while reading :)