Chocolate Fic for space_sick; continuation

[cupid_johnny]

To: space_sick
From: crystallekil

Title: Love Outside the Box (part 2)
Pairing: Akanishi Jin x Nishiyama Maki (main), Yamashita Tomohisa x Kitagawa Keiko, Nishikido Ryo x Nagasawa Masami, and Kamenashi Kazuya x Kuroki Meisa
Rating: NC-17
Summary: When you're famous, having a relationship is much like a covert operation. Jin never particularly enjoyed the emotional

Comments

[b2uty]

there aren't words in existence for how incredible this fic is.

[ryogrande]

thank you ;_;

[space_sick]

okay, first, I never thought I would get Jin/Nishiyama Maki much less my three other favourites in the same fic. and now I want to keysmash but I'll try to be coherent and highlight everything that I liked.

second, good writing! this has to be underlined; the flow of the story is great and the plot is A+!

I love how wrote Jin, Yamapi, KEIKO, Ryo, Maki, Kame...okay it would be easier to say you wrote everyone in this extremely well. and then some scenes made me laugh and sometimes go "aww~" and I really liked the Kame!angst. and then there is how they interacted with each other (lol at Ryo/Masami <3) which I also loved

now for keysmash: asklfjdsfewLKJDFLUFIOEWHA09e8i3jl I GOT A TWO PART STORY SO MUCH JIN/MAKI AND MY OTHER FAVES AND KAT-TUN TEASING BUT SORT OF BEING HELPFUL AND THEN PORN! KYAAAAA!!

Maki peers at him. "You're cute when you're flustered."
Agreed!

Now Jin's eyeing Yamapi, with obvious glances to his watch. Yamapi narrows his eyes and points to the door, as if to retort 'you should talk'. Jin is fully prepared for

[space_sick]

It doesn't surprise him that their first conversation on their First Official Date is about cross-dressing.
I think it's fitting 8D and entertaining for me to read

It's an interesting choice of words, one which has him shaking his head and closing his eyes to her confused expression as he pulls her hand away from her face and leans in. She gasps against his lips but her wrist falls lax in his hand, giving him the green light to tilt his head and kiss her properly. After several heartbeats, she reciprocates, moving her mouth against his just enough for him to feel it in his toes before breaking apart and lowering her head.

He takes her in his arms again, feels her shake with uncertainty and this part is familiar, the comforting way he squeezes her to his chest and presses his mouth to the top of her head.

"I don't think I can fly yet," he says just as anxiously, his voice deep in her hair. "But if you teach me, I'll fly wherever you go." DEAD. the fluff. it's...it's.....PERFECT. I sort of did a ~squiggle~ fail when I read it

[ryogrande]

still so happy i got you. still so happy i friended you.

*steals sparkles and runs*

THANK YOU. ♥

[tinyangl]

I won't lie. I had read this when it first came in (mm, modship), then i read it again afterwards because it's too good to resist re-reading. Just brilliant. I love how everyone was written and their relationships with each other--I was particularly fond of Ryo/Masami :D--and just everything about this fic. The progress, the interactions. ALL OF IT. Just so fucking awesome. :D

[ryogrande]

i love you, kami. i really do.

mmm ryosami. ♥

THANK YOU.

[boycottbananas]

Okay, first of all: I love Maki now. Crazy bitch? Lies. She's obviously amazing.

Second of all: Why are there only four comments for this fanfic. That is total blasphemy. D:

Third: ksfhkjshsfgkhsfkjg I think I know who you are. I hope I know who you are. If not, then plz to be my friend when reveals come out? 83?

[ryogrande]

i love that crazy bitch. XD

i love you too. THANK YOU. ♥

[boycottbananas]

ksdjhskd I KNEW IT WAS YOU! :'D ♥

[doux_baisers]

ÑSDHFLSKDHF THIS IS SO CUTE!
honestly i didn't even think about reading something about these two but it's sooooo brilliant and amazing and sajkhdasjk lol
I ended up with a smile on my face after reading it ♥

and suddenly i have the urge to have more maki icons lol

[ryogrande]

laksjdalskj i'm glad you read it! thank you for reading and commenting! ♥♥