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JE-united surprise fic for h_itoshi

Feb 06, 2016 18:51

Gift fic for h_itoshi

Title: Instruction Manual
Pairing: TakaYama
Rating: PG-15, maybe up to R
Warnings: none
Summary: Yamada is not quite sure how and when it happened, but suddenly he thinks Yuya is hot. Hot enough for Yamada to drop a bomb… as in a confession, or something like that.
Notes: Dear h_itoshi, I was very happy to get you as my assignment. I tried ( Read more... )

p: takaki yuya/ yamada ryosuke, year: 2016, fandom: hey!say!jump, r: pg-15

Comments 1

h_itoshi February 6 2016, 21:59:24 UTC

ANON. I LOVE THIS. It's super cute and really funny and NICE with the build-up and their common confusion about each other <3 Also Keito's romantic advise is A+, a perfect mix of genuine and sappy. Your descriptions are great too, some parts made me laugh out loud because they're just spot on haha.

“Oh my God,” Yamada takes a huge gulp from his self-made Pina Colada. “You are right! It was. A bomb. A huge one. What was I thinking!?”

THIS IS GOLD I can totally see Yamada comfort drinking pina colada haha.

So long that Yuto even excuses himself to go to the bathroom

LOL

I really like that Takaki wears tight pants. Really. And then there's the mention of weight issues ugh babies (and yes they're totally the hottest ones imo too)

Yuri has broken up and gotten together with his girlfriend twice already this eveningThis somehow feels SO in character haha omg ( ... )