mission report for rockthecliche

[capn_planet]

Title: Run to the Sun
Groups/Pairings: Ryo/Massu; appearances by the rest of NEWS, various members of K8/ KAT-TUN, and Kazapon; mentions of misc other J&A boys
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Summary: The transition from professional cupid to stable boy for robotic racing creatures would have been a lot easier if Masuda hadn't been stuck having to

Comments

[tinyangl]

laughing! this was so interesting, anon-san! the world you built was so different and quite unlike anything I've seen before. I like the idea that despite the fact that all these people trained to become what they were, as said by tests, they realized those jobs weren't a good fit and found new ones that were perfect for them. (oh hey, does that sound like life, because yeah.) I liked hearing what their past lives were--like shige and "reasoning" out people's wishes, which lolol, of course shige does. I liked seeing how everyone decided they were matchmakers and how ryo/massu became friends and how something started to grow from that. but i laughed hardest at the ending and how we find out that they are terrible jockeys really and how aiming for first place is kind of impossible. Massu's how about eleventh? made me laugh so hard. awesome job, anon-san! :D

[rockthecliche]

SHRIEK CRYING THIS IS PERFECTION OH GOD I WILL TRY TO BE COHERENT BUT ALAS, THAT MAY FAIL BECAUSE CRYING ROBOT UNICORN ATTACKKKKK

"You'd be much more interesting stable boy if you had a hat and spurs,"
somewhere, nagase is preparing assless chaps. i feel it.

i just, you know, the thing about tm -- something that i absolutely love about them, tbf -- is that tegoshi is the more threatening of the two and acts as massu's protector and just -- it's so tego and you captured that so well and how tegoshi isn't afraid of calling in others to help him, either. OK IN SHORT I LOVE TM IN THIS SO MUCH wah, perfect bros ;; ♥

He might actually take you seriously, and the last time he tried to be intimidating, he broke out in hives."CACKLING NAKAMARU YOUR LIFE IS SO HARD LWHFC;IO3HOE

[beltenebra]

This is such a fantastic universe!!! I loved that you just dropped us right into the story and I really enjoyed learning everyone's jobs/beings. (I have such a huge ridiculous thing for Kitsune Koyama so just with that little tidbit, you had me.) All of the friendships were completely charming and comfortable and everyone really sounded like themselves. I loved every new little detail we learned about the setting and imagining all of the animals was really fun. XD The Ryo/Massu was completely adorable and I loved everything about it. The slow development was perfect and all of their friends helping out. The TegoMass friendship was also amazing, Teggers was perfect. <3 this story was so unexpected and completely delightful, thank you for sharing!

[mayezinha]

This was so loltastic. It took me a bit to get the setting but it was so much fun.
Tegoshi taking care of Massu, Ryo trying to be a bully but failing at it (among other things); Snarky Massu and lots of people showing in this fic.
Thanks for sharing!