mission report for jadeswallow

[capn_planet]

Title: Gossip for the Soccer Moms
Groups/Pairings: Arashi - focus on girl!Nino and Sho, appearances by Aiba and Shu Sakurai
Rating: G
Warnings: Genderswitch
Summary: Shu enlists the help of his older brother Sho to join the neighborhood soccer team, and encounters an unexpected team manager.
Notes: For jadeswallow, who opened the possibility for genderswitch

Comments

[astrangerenters]

Hands down, the funniest thing about this was the rumor mill about Sho vs. Aiba's scooter. I also liked Nino being mostly indifferent to soccer but being the perfect guardian for the kids.

[jadeswallow]

Dear anon, I'm sorry that I've been away from livejournal and internet in general and it took me a long time to comment.
First, yay for girl!nino! I've never actually thought that someone will write me a girl!nino, and a snarky/flirty one even so kudos to that!
I love how you made Sho's love for Shu the reason of their meetings as we rarely have fics with Sho's families in it! And I smile when you reveal the way Nino takes care of her soccer team, and Aiba as the coach is hilarious.
My favorite part is how Sho can only calls her with her family name because he's not on first name phase yet and how asking Shu is DEFINETELY out of question. Lol. Poor Sho. His life seems so hard.
The scenes where Sho takes care of the children and how he keeps watching the kids' soccer game because of well, reasons (that is totally obvious for the moms around of course) are really cute! Is there any girl immune to those charms? It's certainly not me!
Thank tou for writing me this. I enjoy reading it <3