mission report for ltgmars

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Mission report for ltgmars
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Title: And a Hole In Your Door
Groups/Pairings: Yoko/Hina, past Yoko/Maru and Hina/Maru
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Some violence.
Summary: Hina knew he was in for trouble the minute Yokoyama Yuu walked through his door. A film noir-style AU.
Notes: ltgmars, I really, really hope you like this! More thanks

Comments

[ltgmars]

OH MY GOODNESS it's my fic and the header says that you've put my three favorite Eito members in a film noir AU. I CANNOT CONTAIN MY EXCITEMENT.

But! I am a little swamped with things at the moment, so I will return to this within the coming days to read and relish and leave a proper comment for. ♥

[ltgmars]

Ahhh ahhh this was so fantastic! The first scene totally set the mood, and it just filtered on through the story, which was just so fantastic. The banter and the atmosphere and little details (Yoko in a suit will never not get me a little hot and bothered) created the world perfectly.

I loved not know what was going on and being just as confused as Hina and Yoko were. I loved the chase scene in the train! I saw it as if it were a movie playing in my head. I loved the whiskey and the sexual tension and the unanswered questions and the fact that Yoko was the mastermind, twice. I loved that Hina cared about Yoko over the years, and that he still forgave him even after he'd been hurt. The way their relationship is sustained and developed throughout the course of their history is so nicely laid out. Yoko and Hina both stole my heart in this fic.

I'm, uh. Really terrible at gushing, but please know that I really loved this, and I'm sooooooo so so grateful that you wrote it for me. Thank you so much! ♥

[spurious]

I saw it as if it were a movie playing in my head.

yesssssssss \o/ that was the effect I was trying to go for so I'm glad it worked out :D

I'm so so so happy that you liked this! I have never written anything so plotty (or so long), so I was feeling pretty nervous about it! Anyway I'm really glad you liked it~ :DDDDDDDD

[encoded_panties]

s;ddkjf such an awesome fic, I loved it ♥♥♥! The film noir mood was amazing and Yoko and Hina, just ♥♥♥ I loved your characterization.

[spurious]

:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD Thank you!

[suikascented]

I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU and this was just PERFECT AND URGH MY HEART I LOVED EVERY SINGLE BIT OF THIS /cries with joy

...

/loves some more

[spurious]

Yayyyyyy I'm so happy you liked it so much!! :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

[pinkpapyrus]

XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

THEY WOULD BE SO OBNOXIOUSLY WONDERFUL IN MEXICO TOGETHER. ENDING OF WONDER. *____*

I love Hina being capable and Yoko being generally competant at his informantism and their long history together and HINA would let him go ♥

C&PING LATER AFTER WORK.

[pinkpapyrus]

...It's a testament to how often I capslock on my iPhone that autocorrect tries to capitalize all of Eito's names. XD

WAIT I REMEMBERED SOMETHING ELSE.

MARU.

I was profoundly amused by Maru's cameo. XD In fact I will go reread that part now.

[pinkpapyrus]

There are two empty glasses on a corner of the desk, and Hina fills them both.

"I hate this stuff," Yoko says, making a face, but he drinks it anyway.

Oh, Yoko, you contrary bitch. ♥

“I thought I was your information guy,” Yoko says, mock-pouting.

“You never give me anything good.”

“That’s because I’m not a snitch,” Yoko grins.

...XD ILHIM.

“Alright, fine, let’s settle this the old-fashioned way, then.”

Yoko laughs. “Rock paper scissors it is.”

THIS REMINDS ME SO MUCH OF 8UPPERS. AND SO I AM EVEN MORE AMUSED.

"Wait...this means..." Yoko is looking increasingly distraught, and Hina immediately catches on.

"We both..."

As they stand there in horrified silence, contemplating the fact that they've indirectly slept together, Maru smiles and leads them in with a hand on each of their shoulders.

DEAR MARU,

YOU HAVE EXCELLENT TASTE.

-KYA

DEAR Y&H,

YOUR HINT IS CALLING. PICK UP.

-KYA

"Whatever," Hina says, turning the wheel to take them down a sidestreet near the water. "I'm just honest."

PISSY HINA. ♥!!!

Yoko shrugs. “I

[spurious]

THIS COMMENT IS THE GREATEST :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD ILU ♥

[spurious]

Thanks so much for your comment!! :D